cloud hissing saying to tifa wth is wrong with you get that thought of me not loving you out of your head right now of course I love you tifa lockheart i have been in love with you since the first time i saw you yo7 are the the one woman that I want as my gf and my wife I am going to find you where ever you are

Cloud to tifa I am coming to find you and the kids where ever you are and tell you that I love you not aeris

cloud to tifa why are you leaving I love you don t go

That was awesome and sad at the same time! I love it soo much!

ohmygosh, reading this makes my heart hurt.

beautifully written! my eyes teared up, especially when i read tifa voice her thoughts out loud.

way to kill my mood... _

YOU BETTER MAKE A SEQUEL! YOU TOOK MY HEART AND SMASHED IT! NOW PICK UP THE PIECES AND STICK THEM BACK TOGETHER!XD

Loved it... so much... it hurts... it burns...

not fluffy, just the right amount of angst. really felt my heart pull for tifa especially.

well written!

So sad... poor Cloud... poor Tifa... and Marlene and Denzel stuck in the middle...

This story almost made me cry, I love it.

Sad ending... Touching really... I really felt Tifa's pain. The way you wrote this story really marked a place in my heart. It's very beautiful.

aw, i feel bad for chocobo. anyways that was a good story. pls make a sequel

I know this is a one-shot by will there be another chapter for this? This one's good.

I am very saddened right now. And my nose is a bit stuffier than before (I am quite sick right now). Three hearts were broken in this story (mine is the third of course) and the saddest part is, I can see this happening. But even so, I must commend you on the beauty and delicacy of this piece. It's wonderful. I feel that sad stories usually (not always, of course) tend to be better than happy once because there is much more heart and passion in them and they just tend to be such amazing proof of true beauty in humanity. This is an example of that.

Sorry about the "deep-ness." :) One last thing I want to mention is that I was not listening to "My Worst Fear" since I was already listening to "One" by U2 feat. Mary J. Blige, and it worked quite well also. It kind of made me sad but accepting...I suppose? I am sorry; I am not making any sense to myself anymore. Being sick doesn't do wonders to my thinking, I am afraid. Anyway, wonderful job.

Wow, what a tragic ending. Poor Cloud. Poor Tifa. Your writing was terrific all the way through, and the plot kept me captivated the entire time. Great job.

Wow this was amazing.

Pulled at my hearts strings.

If only it wasn't a one-shot,

but nonetheless I enjoyed reading it,

very well written.