Short, but interesting, none the less.

Ah! I love the style of this! Different! Unique! Plus, it feels as though there's a sense of desperation in those words! Man, I really love the way you wrote this! Hope you don't mind if I try that style out someday (in a completely different fandom, and with credit to you of course)! It really inspired me. Wonderful job!

ne update update!

Nice style. It's a little confusing, but focus will do. This is good, and deep and rather enigmatic, slightly. It's nice.

~PT

Wow.

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