Love. So much love. I can actually say I wasn't expecting the twist even though it seems kind of obvious now. I've read so many of these 'what if one of your favorite characters died' fics, but this twist was a first. though I suppose it is the first show that I've read fics for has allowed for a twist like that. Nice work.

This is fantastic. Excellent characterization, love the story, and you really got all the dialog and reactions spot-on. Thanks so much for sharing. :)

Oh you NEED to do a follow up. This is fantastic :)

I'm just a random interloper passing through this fandom, but... That was wonderful. *sigh* Absolutely perfect.

E! I can't believe you finished this! And so absolutely wonderfully. This turned out so much better than I thought!

I know I'm woefully behind on reading your stuff, I have your prequel to Choke Chain in my email marked for reading. chalk it up to new motherhood exhaustion, and the fact that every time I start reading something, the kidlet decides to wake up and fuss. Dammit.

I love Walter's "evil clone" suggestion! and Peter's emotions are so perfectly Peter, this makes me even more excited about the season premier this week!

Lovely m'dear. Your stories still make my day, and beleive me, with these hormones and lack of sleep, I needed the pick-me-up!

I really like this, it's kind of bittersweet.

Wow! That was well-writeen and very intense.

Leave it to Walter to deliver the funny but serious line:

"I'm sorry, Peter, but how do we know this one is ours?"

Very interesting...doppelgangers indeed. :)

Ah...once more, your angst is awesome!

That was a great twist at the end.

I knew you wouldn't kill her ! At least not HER. :D

"His shudder isn't entirely due to the cold."

Hm, great line, it reminds me of Midnight, "you know what I dislike more than the cold ?"

Great one, well written !

BenchyLizard

(from F-F)