quiero el capitulo 13 de esta historia es muy buena

dropped reading. I dont like reading Naruto being bossed around by Reborn. I like reading BAMF Naruto like the on "To light up the Sky"

Yeah, no. I thought you were going contrast the usual happy go lucky attitude with a more serious character but apparently all you could write was a generic one with attitude.

The mess they make is foo funny. Lol.

Yamamoto still thinks it's a game. *sweat drops*

Lol. That's hilarious. XD

Hope you plan on returning to finish it.

interesting story with the moon guardian position

Sad face!

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so, what are Moon Flame's properties? and what is the 8th Earth Flame?

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The ark you were on is the final one so try to she it through to the end and see if it might not respark your interest in this fic

Are you going to give naruto a sanji-like fighting style (sanji from one piece in case you don't know who I'm talking about)

Hmmm I thought it was good but you should have add kyuubi in this to make naruto a bit stronger though but I like it a lot how the way you interact the characters of naruto but, I love it nice work though