Reviews for Walkabout |
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pure-class-princess chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 Did you mean to put King George as a character, not King Carney? |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2013 hi |
suns and stars chapter 3 . 9/16/2010 very nicly done |
RooC chapter 2 . 9/27/2009 You have lovely and vivid imagery and a real love of this land and these places, painting them for us with a loving hand. I'm getting that you see these character for who and what they are but also as vehicles for telling a bigger story. Both are good stories and thus far are equally engaging. Having read the notes on the other story you posted "Mission" I know you've struggled with finding Nullah's voice. I feel that you made a wise choice here to let the poetry of his speaking the language of his grandfather's language come through. Nice work! |