I love it!

That's lovely, I'm just beaming now. What a beautiful happy ending.

oh my god. in 45 minutes i am sitting on history exams and i am reading snarry fan fiction. but they are so good, especially this one. i loved it.

Really a sweet fic! _ i think that you did a great job here. But I would had loved to read more of Harry-severus rellationship, it was too fast. Even so, you did a great job. A really original and unique fic. Congratulations!

Take care,

Carmen

so short... thanks god that there is left one chapter more! So exciting! _

I completely loved this chapter! So so so sweet and nice! And lily is so cute! Although I'm sorry that you didn't write about their developing rellationship. Even so, I enjoyed it a lot! Good job! _

Wow... Harry is very brave saying to severus that he loves him. I mean, before that night Snape hated harry. Even so, I enjoyed the chapter. I'm keeping reading. _

So sweet when Snape met albus severus... _ I think that deep inside he is so touched that Harry named his soon as him. _

wonderful chapter!

This would be so much easier to read if it wasn't all underlined.

aw

what a great story so far

Great Chapter Please Update ASAP

i hope you can update soon im enjoying this

I already love this story! It's brilliant! Please update as soon as you can!

Great start! Though it's better and more natural to read a story without the whole text being underlined. It's just a piece of advice.

I hope to see more of this story soon. I really liked the first chapter, so please continue!

For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

w w w . geocities sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student