Reviews for The story behind the numbers
Kaito Echizen chapter 7 . 12/4/2018
mmmm

Kaito is hungry wants to eat
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 7 . 2/18/2010
Looks like Ryou and Choutarou finally meet. I'm glad that Ryou got away from his parents. Update soon please!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 7 . 2/18/2010
Huh, I've been trying to figure out the order they joined for a while now...Looks like I got a couple of them wrong, darn. Kintarou's 15th and I thought he was seventh... Darn. Well, now I know!

I like how these people ended up meeting at the party, thing... It makes me giggle. As does the last line. Win for Niou, it seems like those two wont be able to avoid being set up.

I'm glad Ryou left.

Well written. Good read. Keep it up!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 6 . 12/23/2009
Kintarou's such an interesting person... I'd been wondering how he ended up in the numbers if he'd started in a different gang. I like finding out!

I wondered how Kei and Senri reacted when they first met again after Senri ended up on the streets... Especially since him being kicked out was a FAR more extreme action the Kei seemed to expect in the first flashback. Thanks for adding that! Now I wonder how Kei reacted when he first found out the Senri was on the streets and part of another group...

So Kintarou was the seventh to join?

LOVE the raccoon story addition and Shuusuke's constant teasing Senri about it!

Well written! Great read! Keep it up!
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 6 . 12/23/2009
And now we get Kintarou's story. _ Looks like he's still as excitable as ever. Update soon please!
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
Geeze. Everyone in Akaya's school is a jerk. I'm glad that he got together with the Number. I can't wait until this is updated again.
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 5 . 10/27/2009
I like the most everyone walking Akaya to school thing. And how, once he actually had time, supplies, and people willing to help, his grades improved so much.

Love that Genichirou was able to pass as Akaya's guardian.

That's when Ryoma was first called Princess? *giggles* I like that we got to see that scene!

Oh, and also, Shuusuke was the one who said "Take a seat and ignore all the weirdness"? Then I guess Akaya was supposed to ignore him, since he is definitely a lot of it!

Well written. Good read. Please continue!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 4 . 10/21/2009
Huh... Interesting way to end up in Japan. I wonder what Jackel's parents did to get so much into debt and sell him to that man (or whatever happened.) Not that he or the readers will ever know...

Shuusuke amuses me, wacking Gen in the back of the head and all, and so completely confounding Jackel. I like Gen's response to why he was helping.

Well written, fun read. I like it.
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 4 . 10/21/2009
This got updated! That's an interesting way of getting Jackel to Japan. I never actually thought of that before. Well, it certainly does explain how and why he joined up with the Numbers. I can't wait until the next update!
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
I wondered what would happen if Sadaharu ever went to the place his parents owned... I like the idea of him returning with Yanagi. I LOVE that one of the customers still remembered and recognized him... From the conversation with Mariko, it sounds like Sadaharu's parents never told anyone that they threw him out... Is that a correct assumption?

Poor Inui, having to deal with bullying like THAT all the time as a kid... I'm glad the numbers found him.

Well written. Good read.
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 3 . 10/3/2009
Looks like we got a more indept background about Sadaharu. Yay. I know that you said this story was on hold, so I'm always really excited when I see that this was updated. _
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 2 . 9/28/2009
I've been wondering how Jirou hooked up with the Numbers. How could his parents ever forget a child as cute as him? Poor thing. I can't wait until you decide to update this.
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 2 . 9/28/2009
Jirou's parents just FORGOT him? And apparently never even bothered to try to find him after the moved? Or even worse, saw him asleep and decided NOT to wake him and bring him... Wow, that's harsh. I'm glad after that he managed to end up with the numbers, of all people, since he was left behind... How old was he then, I wonder... Actually, this seems to really fit his personality. I couldn't think of any reason why he'd have ended on the streets before this.

Poor Yuuta, with his leg taken captive by the sleeping number!

By the way, at the beginning of the chapter, you have Jirou sleeping under a three, instead of a tree...

I like it. Well written. Good read. I'm looking forward to more backstories!
phoenixfirekitsune chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Oh! You started off with Senri. It's so easy for him to make Shiraishi blush. XD Update soon please! I want to know more about the Numbers' backgrounds.
Khelek-sul Renai chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
That makes sense, how Senri came to join, I mean.

I'm annoyed at his parents now. I like that you talked about his sister.

Shiraishi's blushing made me grin...

Oh, I was wondering about the number "tattoos" and how they changed them when their ranks changed. This makes a lot of sense.

I like it! I really want the stories to continue.