Yes, I do think this is an interesting premise. Eternal life, always covetted but never prized by its owner. Still, I think Peter/Ender would have had the guts to take control of this space time distortion. Then they would travel to another universe~! Sorry, my delusions. But good prose! Keep at it!

Waiting very anxiously for more!

wow...thats all i got to say, just, wow...

First I just want to say that the story was amazing. I've read every book (released so far) in both the Ender and the Shadow series and you write almost exactly like Orson Scott Card. The beginning was perfect, like a cherry on top. (haha) The words, the sentence structure, especially the references to history and Wang-mu's not, it all seemed like genuine Card. The one thing that bothered me was your reference to the Outside as Out-space. It's not too big a deal; it's probably just my OCDness (or am I godspoken? lol) I'm not sure what a review is supposed to be like because this is my first time writing one but this story is great! I would really like to read more from you.

Interesting, so this takes place after...dangit forgot the last book title. Xeniocide? No...dang... so far!

-Lon

Interesting idea. It did, of course, cross my mind that they could all live as long as they wanted to with Jane around as I read it. What I'm REALLY curious about are Jane and Miro's children. What are they like? Are they just as mentally strong as their mother? Do they have human capacity? Or are they somewhere in between?

And I'm pretty sure it's the hive queen and Human/Rooter talking at the beginning, just like in Xenocide.

Interesting start! It felt complete, but I'm glad to see there'll be more on the way. Are we supposed to know who's "talking" at the beginning, or will that be revealed later on?