Reviews for She Only Smokes When She Drinks
smut1956 chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
It is short but says so much with those few well chosen words. Not into song fic per se and you make that work by just mentioning the title. You work around that the way Mac and Stella are working around their true feelings.

Thanks for sharing this.

T.
HSMSupernatural chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Great Story!
SMackedCaskett chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
Describes their relationship perfectly.
csiAngel chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
Aww this is great. Excellent characterisation and such a smooth read. I really enjoyed reading this.
laurzz chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
J! This was amazing. I loved it. 3 that song!

I could totally see this. And Stella's reaction - fabulous!

I adored how they interlocked hands in the cab after she'd sobered and more or less told him why she was as wasted as she was - cause she didnt want to go home. My heart broke for her.

I agree with it being the favourite thing of your's you've written recently... til your next one at least :P

Amazingly amazing, J! Great job!

Loves it! And you!

~ L x
Synnove chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
Dear Julia. I have a message for you; it goes as follows:

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I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU

Love

Jenna
lily moonlight chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
I really liked this! I like your Mac/Stella writing, and would definitely push for more :D It was a short and lovely fic. I loved Mac coming to help Stella, and the acknowledgement that they help each other. Loved their hands joining, and what Stella says :D
afrozenheart412 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
And fits Stella and Mac to a T. God, I hate that episode, I wanted to kill the scumbag myself. My favorite line "He doesn't know when it happened; the day he started wanting more from Stella Bonasera, more from his partner, more from his best friend. Maybe there wasn't a specific day, it just slowly progressed over the nearly twenty years they've known one another." You can feel her pain and his longing. This is gold.
Oneturtledove chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Yum :)
DNAisUnique chapter 1 . 9/9/2009
Ha, I love that his is the only number she remembers when she's uber-toasted.

Hey! No one better be buying her a wedding ring unless his name is Mac Taylor! :)

"What is it about me? Do I emit a beacon that only dogs and severely emotionally messed up men can hear?" Best line!

"Why do you always clean up my messes?" She wondered.

"Because you always clean up mine." Mac replied simply.

"I love you." Stella murmured.

Love this little snippet! It's so true!

Love the last paragraph too. Actually, I love this from beginning to end.

D