| Reviews for Rite of Passage |
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   0anhonestpuck0 chapter 1 . 11/3/2016 Hahahahahaha |
| Smithrooks chapter 1 . 10/31/2014 Hahahahhaa. I love it! |
| engellicka chapter 1 . 4/30/2014 funny story |
| OstensiblyInsane chapter 1 . 11/7/2013 this. This is so funnnyyy, I kicked my wall and knocked over my water as I fell out of my chair, and got splashed in the face. i was still laughing. not even drowning will stop me. |
| DrummerDancer chapter 1 . 8/12/2013 Funny! I enjoyed this very much. |
| ec-writes chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 I got quite a few chuckles from this. I love the overall awkwardness of the situation. |
| Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012 Lol! That was too hilarious. I actually laughed out loud and everything XD |
| AnguaMarten chapter 1 . 9/21/2012 this was HILARIOUS. that is all. |
| Auto-Alchemechanicist chapter 1 . 9/28/2011 Ahahahaha! Classic comes to mind. XD At least Hohenheim is a father at something. LOLed hardcore at Ed's slamming and the spat. it! -Auto- |
| dragonball256 chapter 1 . 7/9/2011 Wow this is certainly hilarious, especially since its all mostly in character. Great fic. |
| ANIMELOVEDOLL chapter 1 . 5/8/2011 Very cute! :D |
| LightMyBulb chapter 1 . 5/3/2011 lol so embarassing |
| EbonyIvoryy chapter 1 . 4/25/2011 Wonderfuls! :'D I love advise-filled Papa Hoho! You kept him, Ed, and Winry very well IC. -heart- And it kept me laughing the whole way through! You really know your EdWin, don'cha? Keep writing with those magical fingers of yours! |
| Levan chapter 1 . 9/29/2010 This fic deserves a heartfelt applause. When Hohenheim goes in the picture, you really knew how he would react to this. :D |
| wishfulliving89 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010 ha ha. love the story, very cute an funny. |
