I need a multi-chapter fic with these babies. Now.

Lmao I loved this

Well, that was a "little" OOC! It was a good story, I enjoyed it.

I like Lizzie and Jacob, they had good potential. You could easily make a short story out of this if you wanted to add more chapters.

awesome.

Lol at the ending xD

I love it, I love it, I Love it! Oneof the best storys iv read!

Edward held Bella’s limp body Pre-Crisis Supergirl style yelling at the sky. “NO!”

lol awesome

OMG! LOVE IT! FUCKING HILARIOUS!

OMG hahahahah this is hilarity and sexiness at its best, Jacob style :D

Love the little Edward cameos: screaming, "I'LL KILL YOU, ROSALIE! I'LL KILL YOUU!" Pawns.

And love Lizzie's "I'm only in two pages." ROFL

Brilliant! The ending with Leah is awesome. Marvelous job!

Did Bella die? What happened to Edward? What did Rosalie do?

Sorry but i was curious. Are you a boy or a girl? How old are you. Again sorry but hey. I'm a curious girl. Please PM me with the awnsers. Please. (Does puppy dog look.) lol. Nice story. Wish that really happened. He should've got together with Lizzie. Would have saved Seth an injury.

lol loved it ]

Lmfao! I loved it. 'See why we're going to South California!'

Halerious.

I've been reading all your stories this weekend and I love them all!

omg i liked the ending everyones all turned on each other and Jake's just like whatever screw them let's go on a road trip lol that's a nice aditude to have on life ( omg u know what would be like another weird story you could do...what about Jake and Rose? You know how they hate each other but people say when you hate someone you actully love them or have a crush on them or whatever and then like maybe the rest of the family will all walk by rose's rome and they'll be like ewe Emmett and Rose are at it again and then emmett all comes over and is like...i'm over hear lol idk that would be funny though (