I love your story. It's definitely the best written Fantasic Four story that I have read yet. Your story and dialogue, flow well and you have enough original detail to keep us interested. Overall we'll done.

cute even if they weren't really together in this you could tell there was something there more then annoyance at his presence

wicked they must look so cool together when they are fully on fire or water

cold icy water im guessing she is going to be gifted with water and ice and other forms of it

you know what would be cool if she goes on the trip if she got powers like storm from x-men

Great story. Basic Fantastic Five except with a twist. Usually when someone writes a story like this, the fifth member usually has cryogenic abilities, but I like how you have Kara control water instead. And the love/hate between her and Johnny is perfect, instead of her having an immediate crush. I love it! (But that's just my opinion ;)

C-sama ;3

that was great, you should do the second movie :D

I love this :D

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"I organized it so that a monkey could find the towels... blindfolded."
gees, that was brilliant... dying of laughter here!

Ah. That was a very cute bit at the end. I hope part 2 is up either now or very soon.

love it

Dude. Coolest story ever. I seriously am in love with this. It's soo cool. :D

wow i loved it

just rewatched it and thought he could use some one to keep him in line

sequel? pretty please!

I can't wait for part 2! xD Me excited so please update soon!