Wow, I love this! Such a beautifully worded piece. I'm trying to put my finger on what it makes me feel, or how Bella is feeling throughout the story, and I think it's both resigned and melancholy.
The end has me curious as to which way she went. I'm hoping she chose herself over everyone else and literally got on the motorbike and left, but then there could also be a darker way for her to go...
Thanks :)

Your words are amazing, I'd like more of this story!

- Raum

Your words are elegant, descriptive, and beautiful. I love the way you wrote this! ]

ooh, i like it!

very interestingly written.

great job :)