this was cute. i like seeing leon grumpy and all parent-y... ish. haha 3

i am unable to put into exact words how much i adore this fic. this pairing gets so little love, so this is truly a gem in my opinion.

Awesome job! this was absolutely one of the best stories i've read, loved every bit of it. From beginning to end, well done.

Wow, just wow! I loved this story, I don't even know where to begin. I think it's my favorite Squall(Leon)/Seifer story (not that I know many, especially not with this seme/uke order) and overall one of my favorite KH fanfics so far!

What I thought most interesting is that while many people write gen well and can't write smut and vice-versa, you nailed both perfectly, it was always a pleasure to read. I also like the combination of action and thoughts. Lately, I've come across a lot of fics where it tends to get too much into monologues etc instead of letting actions speak (I tend to write like that myself, too). And it doesn't always work when you only line one action after another, it's a good mixture here.

I love the idea of Leon living with a boy, their personalities make it so interesting with Leon being all introverted and grumpy and Seifer... well, Seifer. XD Also loved Leon's internal struggle and just his voice in the story. One of my absolute favorite lines has to be this: "And there were no girls around, and Seifer probably had no idea, he probably didn't even like guys, really, he was…what was that term – experimenting and why oh why had he chosen Leon for his stupid experiments, he wasn't a hamster, and why hadn't the brat decided to get a crush on someone reasonable instead, like say Tifa or Aeris or Yuffie. Not Cloud, though. Not Cloud. That would be unacceptable. His hair was too spiky."

So random with Cloud's spiky hair, rofl. The smut is also one of the best written smut I've ever read, kudos to that especially and that it's not just the act, but you can really feel the neediness and the emotion behind it, especially afterward. BTW I've already read it a few times before finally reviewing. I wish there was more, I've also read your other fic with Leon and Seifer today - unfortunately, LJ doesn't work right now for me so I can't look, but I guess there's nothing else from you regarding this pairing? :3

In between reading this I just wanted to reach out and touch. Touch. You made it so real - amazing.

Thank you so very very much!

So gorgeous. Brutal, romantic, gritty, and dramatic. Parts IV, V, and XI are my favourites. Thank you so much for writing this gem.

FINALLY a good Seifer/Leon fic (although I wasn't expecting this to be a lemon lol) Wonderful story. I'd glad you took the time to really develop their relationship in this universe _

b-bloody nose D:

This was beautiful, i love it. The way you write is amazing C:

I don't know what made me look for leonseifer fics when i'm more of a leoncloud fan, but surely i couldn't even hope to find something like good!

Didn't skip anything!

thanks for writting this :D

This is such a beautiful, wonderful, perfect fic! I seriously don't know what to say, other than thank you so much for having written it and uploading it.

The characterization is spot-on and I love the way you set the story up.

Really, really breath-taking! There should be so much more stories like this one...

Thank you!

Lovely writing and the Characterizations were good. Sex scene was incredible; tenderness just dangling on the edge of wanton lust.

Absolutely beautiful! I was never a Leon/Seifer fan, actually this is the first Leon/Seifer story i've ever read, and I have to say, you set quite a high precedent for everyone else to follow.

It's a writing style very unlike mine and because of that I find it all the more attractive.

Succinct with a dash of sarcasm, humor, nostalgia, romance, and tragedy.

There's really not much more I can say without sounding repetitive.

I really adore this story. And whatever inspired you to branch away from your usual HP fandom to write this story, I hope you find more of it! Because I for one will be looking out for future L/S or S/S stories.

So please continue to write and entertain your new audience.

~Baby Chi~

Stunning - love your writing style to bits. So beautiful. Just perfect. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story and for writing for a Kingdom Hearts pairing that isn't that popular (really wish it was).

I can't believe how many lines in the story I've fallen in love with.

Amazing.

Oh my God, that was such a beautiful fic. I don't know why this only got 1 review. Man, they didn't know what they missed. Such a great plot, four thumbs up! XD

damn

i've wanted to read this forever - the Kingdom Hearts version of them, beautifully written and the story unfolding in several snapshots

the line about 'too spiky' Cloud's hair was very amuzing, really Leon, you could've picked a more reasonable thing to be upset about

it's a beautiful fic