Reviews for Life of a Dream Stalker |
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amanda124 chapter 5 . 11/25/2016 I really like this story but I did notice the use of the word "retard" when describing the party. This is an extremely offensive term to a lot of people. It is a very derogatory term for people with disabilities and implies that people with disabilities are not equal to people without. I understand that you were trying to portray Adrian's thoughts but there are many words that get the point across. I am not meaning this to be an attack on you, I just assume that you just did not realize how offensive this term can be. Many people do not and I feel that the only way they ever will is if someone tells them. |
Rachelthereader02 chapter 9 . 8/16/2014 You should do the scene where Rose asks Adrian to compel him to kiss her. |
CherishMe2000 chapter 1 . 2/20/2012 I think you should have Adrian Dream-Walk Dimitri Now THAT would be funny |
Scourge4-eveh chapter 9 . 10/15/2011 LOL you did great with this one, I loved it when he used compulsion on Jesse and Ralf, but isn't two GUYS calling him Mr. Hot Sexy Studmuffin(LMAO) kinda queer? |
Scourge4-eveh chapter 8 . 10/15/2011 That was not suckish! You are the GOD of adrians pov. I was actually laughing my fucking ass off, my sister came into the room and stared at me like I was stupid (which I kind of was, she had no idea what I was laughing about) That was exactly what I needed. XDXDXDXDXDXD X3X3X3X3X3X3 |
Roza-ComradeBelikovIvashkov chapter 2 . 8/12/2011 So good! |
Ivashkov.Heart chapter 8 . 5/2/2011 OMG AHAHAHAHAHAH LMFAO CHAPTER 8. FREAKIN LOVE IT SOOOO FUNNY :D AHAHAHAHAH :) |
Fee-Sha16 chapter 9 . 3/15/2011 Very interesting & funny! Awesome job!) |
Brittney chapter 8 . 1/21/2011 HHAHAHAHAHHAHHAHAH! :d cHAPTER 8 IS HILARIOUS! GOOD JOB! |
hi chapter 2 . 9/22/2010 rose and adrain plz and keep going with the story and rose and adrian should be together |
i love adrian chapter 4 . 9/9/2010 i love how you show Adrian's affectionate and his the smartass attitude i love your writing i love how u have him when his with rose i love how hes in love adrian is like everyone else when hes in love like i said b4 i love u and my man adrian! i want u 2 do some more fanfic |
i love adrian chapter 3 . 9/9/2010 how can it be terrible? "There wasn't much I could do with this chapter" there was a lot you could do with this chapter like when adrian does that age takl i was so out of it but when u did it in APOV i so go it like i said b4 u r my fav fanfic love u |
i love adrian chapter 1 . 9/9/2010 Coz u said "Please please please please with a cherry on the top, review this!" i will review it and this is what i have to say "FUCKING LOVE IT ! how could i Hated it?" you do adrian so well its so good it like my fav fanfic of adrian! how on earth is this ya 1st fanfiction ? do some more fanfic i would love to hear more from you love ya BIG time and ADRIAN |
Socrates' prodigy chapter 1 . 8/20/2010 Oh man, I really like this story so far! I feel like you really got Adrian's character and personality down colded! You can't until I see him walk into Rose's dream! :) |
Mrs.Quinn-Fuentes chapter 8 . 7/11/2010 bahahaha omg this is so funny i was cracking up hahahaha i looooove it :D hahahaha |