This...This was...

Omigosh, what's this oozy colorless discharge seeping out of my eyes? (not a joke.)

...heartbreakingly beautiful and painful.

The writing style, the words you've used, it's perfect. He morphed her into a faded version of his own..."Falling in love with Sasuke was just like drowning." So true.

Ok, this is the first time I'm LACKING worthy enough words for such an AMAZING story, so I'll take my leave. It's definitely going in my favorites!

p.s I didn't get the title.

I loved it! You are just awesome. It had some poetic lines as well which I loved as hell! Dude! I don't know who ya are but ya better become an author or some poet or even both! Cause man your gonna rock the world with your writing. GO AHEAD! I LUVED IT!

like unfinished number of paper cranes left inside an unused cupboard, still yet to be a thousand, made by a child of 18 who's to leave for college and never to return for years.. this peice felt like a tissue worn out by the sunlight that seeps through a window, irritably warm to touch and dusty to the finish..

Really sad.

Oh my gosh. I know this review is probably meaningless to you, seeing how there are so many others telling you what a wonderful writer you are, but seriously. This is amazing. You are amazing at writing. (So much that i am so freakin' jealous.) HOW DO YOU DO THIS? HOW ARE YOU SO SKILLED AT TOUCHING PEOPLE'S HEARTS WITH YOUR WRITING AND HAVING YOUR SENTENCES STICK WITH THEM FOREVER?

ThaNkS. D keep more coming!

This story was so so so good, written in a way that accentuated each little pang in my heart. It really is a beautiful story, even if the ending is horrifyingly(in the best way possibly) sad.

your similies and metaphors were awesome and so good :D and yeah it must have been painful to write :( but its beautifully written.

I love this. Some of the imagery was so moving.

that was heartbreaking and absolutely beautiful.

this is painful.

but it could have been better, like written for an original story instead of a fanfic.

nonetheless keep up the awesome job. love your works:D

wow. i freaking bawled.

this was amazing. mind blowing. poetic.

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Poetry in motion. Beautifully painful little vignette that captures the poignancy of Sakura's doomed love, and the pain of Sasuke's forever broken soul. Wonderfully written, dear.

That was so depressing! I thought it was so nicely written, though. I like the style. (:

You say that this was so painful to write, and I say that this was so painful to read. I really wanted to stop reading halfway through and close the window because I could sense that the story would have a terrible ending. But I couldn't because I needed to know exactly know it would end, that my hunch was wrong, that Sasuke was redeemable, that Sakura would find happiness. But I was right. And my heart broke.

I kind of want to hate you for writing something so so SO angsty and horrible. I obviously cannot, however, because sad stories are often the most beautiful. I loved how you tied the scenes together with very creative themes. The last bit seemed to make for a cut-off ending though. It feels like one more line should have been added or something to make the story complete. Other than that, good work! I, as always, look forward to reading more from you (except maybe something more happy next time?)! ;)

love -heart-