Love that 'conversation'. Your Tony is amazing!

I've said it before and I will say it again...I love the way you write Tony and Ziva! OMFG! So effing good!

Hey I know you probably won't read this as this is one of your older stories, but do you realize that you just predicted the storyline for season 13, not the actual things that happen but the concept of tony and Gibbs? Just thought I should tell you even if you don't read this.

I have said it before...I'm late to the party on fan fic. BUT Awesome, friggin awesome. Thanks, Allie

I cant tell you how much I enjoyed reading this story. Once I started it I could not put it down. I wish the NCIS writers would do something along these lines BEFORE Ziva left the series. Now he has this other woman who I don't think fits him as well as Ziva did. Anyway is there any hope of having a series of this story to be continued? If so I am on board. Thanks for several hours of total enjoyment and looking forward to more of your work.

This exemplifies perfectly why I cannot damn well find any decent Tony/Ziva fic - the characters are ridiculous, the 'romance' would disgrace a bad Harlequin novel and they both need their asses fired for plain self-obsessed stupidity. And Tony's holier-than-thou streak is nauseating.

I wish wish WISH I hadn't clicked on this...

What a great ride!

Come ooonnnn! Love it!

Love this one too!

Love this too,

Lovely story with an excellent ending! :)

I like that Abby and McGee aren't spoilng the secret to Gibbs about the Burn message, but IMHO that doesn't mean Yassar wouldn't use it. On the contrary, looks to me like he'd easily and perfectly would be able to make the same connection and track down Ziva / Tony.

Otherwise I'm really liking this! :)

I was expecting this. Seems to be a too obvious flaw in the burn phone plan for Ziva and Tony to have overlooked. Either it's your intention that it is Ziva's intention or otherwise I find it to be a flaw in an otherwise good story, sorry.

I've read this story too many times to count and every single time this line gets me:

"While he'd spend four years telling himself not to touch her, not to fall for her, not to love her, Ziva had spent four years putting herself further and further out there for him."

This is SO, SO true of their dynamic on the show. The more she puts herself out there for him, the more he pulls away. Ugh! It seemingly never ends and has been going in since S3. I think she really did try to finally move on after his not so nice reception of her in S7 and she did for a while with Ray, but again, nothing. That conversation in S8 in the bar, she looked like she was ready to give up everything for him and then he tells her that being with EJ is easy, that he understands her. The pain in her eyes at that comment? Again in S9, no Ray, no EJ but then Tony has Wendy now. Just how many times is it going to take for him to realize that she going to turn around and walk away one day?

So, so good J! This is one of my favourites. Thanks for sharing! :)

This story was really good and that is saying something. Everyone was right in character even Abby and McGee which when it is a Tiva story people forget about. I was impressed except I think tony would have made the first mood to kiss her not ziva to kiss tony but otherwise it was fantastic! Thanks for the great story!