If Ed dies at the end of this, I am seri ously gonna cry coz this fanfiction is r eally really good. if u kill off Ed, i w ill be bawlling my eyes out, probably sc reaming into my pillow, trust me, its no t easy to make me cry.

why? that's my only question. why? its really sad this is. I'm hoping its not the real ending though hehe. In fact, even though this was short. it was so good that i'm still crying even as i write this hahahaha :')

What's this filty end O.O i don't like it. ! arg ! Please add caractere dead to the resume The story was so good this far TT_TT

Very well Written.A couple of spelling Tris's POV was a little hard to follow.I was surprised when you wanted to end it the first way...which in a away actually seemed more fitting than the actual ending((Chapter 15)).Then again,it tells more about what happens ratehr than cut it off and leave every one wondering.

Really great beginning, I look forward to reading this entire story. Thanks for sharing!

Aw I loved it! Crazy things happened. You are amazing

thats so sad poor havoc poor al! :( (sniff)

*sniffle*I am honestly crying was so! good your writing skills are incredible and i love this story so much.I remember reading it in august and saying "I wonder how this story will turn out" and it turned out incredibely!

I think i'll miss was really extremely good!I can't wait to see the sequal maybe a few new foes?

aw thats soo cute!

Nice chapter, ooh a war! Looks like a few action scenes coming. I loved the phone scene, poor Ed!

Poor Izumi, last to know eerything. Im so happy huges is back. I also liked the article you wrote, it must hae been funny when the practically destroyed the train car for a bet. Still hilarious. That reminds me; why havent you added this story to the humour genre? i mean, rather than general, it is fairly funny?

ery nice and i appreciated how long it was, it made this easier to understand since you took the time to explain everything. I knew Weston was bad news. Im happy Roy finally made a moe and im happy that Hoenheim makes an appearance in this story. great work

Im no sure whether i like Weston or not, but we'll see. This chapter was mega sweet and i loed how Ed put on his old outfit, you explained the logic behind it perfectly. I like the bond that the whole team has here, its beautiful. Roy and Ed together, aw, so sweet!

That was very funy, i really needed that laugh. Roy and Ed seem to get on very well and i think thats nice for a change. I liked that little scene where Ed fell asleep on the desk and i liked the transition of them both being promoted. You wrote that part very well.

Hey, nice chapter. i felt a little sorry for Ed, since he's on his own now, but I'm glad everything worked out for Al and winry. he deserves to be happy after all he went through.

so Ed is finally a military dog, good for him, anyway great beginning and I'll review it more as i read on. Loved Fullmetal so I'm giving the fanfiction a chance. Kudos!