For your first HP fic, this was a wonderful, wonderful start. Getting both Voldemort (different from Tom in many ways, I think) and Minerva right takes a lot of work, and I think you did a splendid job. This was a very captivating chapter, and it's something I haven't read before. I'm excited to read more!

I love the thought of Minerva becoming the dark queen. You also made Lord Voldemort seem a bit human as he displayed his love and affection for her. You made me torn in the last chapters. I didn’t know if I wanted the dark side to win or the light side. Great job and story, I really loved it.

-Yue Sai

I want to hate it I really do but I just can't! Evil!Minerva is a brilliant idea. She's my favorite HP charrie and honestly I never saw doing anything like this with her but you're brilliant.

It reminds me of a ADMM fic I read years ago where really Dumbles was an abusive huband kinda thing. Totally unexpected. Hope to read more from you :D

Oh, my God!

This story was brilliant, start to finish.

Utterly believable of Dumbledore, and if one casts aside the belief that Minerva has always been 'good', the story really is not far-fetched.

The paradox that Minerva is being good whilst turning bad...still teaching, still basically caring about her students. Refusing to kill to extend her own life.

Snape tying to 'save' her, at the end, the way he himself was saved.

And Hermione, still being the cleverest witch of her age!

I loved it all, well done

Oh My Gosh! I love this story! Dark Minerva, always knew she had it in her! Wonderful job.

Loved it :) Love Dark!MM xD Great idea and great writing :)

Thanks for a good fic and well done :)

This was one of the best stories I have ever read. Your description of the battle really took me there. I could see it unfold before my eyes. You did the only thing you could do. She had to die, other wise the whole story would have been a lie. Your a very strong writer and it was a privalidge to read your story, and maybe be a little instramental in having you write more. Looking forward to more stories and putting you on my favorite authors list. Good NIght.

Brilliant idea and I liked how you wrote Minerva's relationship with Voldemort. I also thought Dumbledore was an old fool to wipe her memory and not expect her to be furious when she found out. Thanks for writing.

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This is a very surprising pairing, but the story is interesting...

ok I love your story but if you kill Voldie or Minnie I will kill you! :)

great job!

update soon...

This is so good. YOu imaganation is just beyond most I've ever seen. I just love this story. Will Minerva be redeamed when she dies. I think going after the golden trio this may be impossible. But If anyone can find a way you can. This is so good. ( Severus may have to be the one to kill her, He is probably the only other one that can get to her. Have a great night.

So good to hear from you again. Minerva is right,Severus being in love with her will offer her his full protection. But he still better watch his step. I'm afraid by the end of the story Minerva will have to die. And dark or not that will be a shame. IS there a loop hole in their bonding? Their loyalty is to each other, it may be best for them to go together. Well, looking forward to more. Have a great night.

Glad you updated.

I like where this is going. Severus admiting his love and Minerva being conflicted. I'm thinking about Voldemort's first reaction and I get chills. Your doing so good on this, can't wait for more.