this it my favourite twilight fanfiction

Please continue please

I would love a couple more chapters...awesome story.

This story is hot, lol. Please update again, please.

And lol. I knew it! Edward is gay, LMAO. xD I knew it. :p

Great story hope you keep at it. I love Rosalie

looking forward to the next update

It was a lot of fun.

Totally get why it was never updated for so long but it was jjsy a blast and cray dom Rose with a Bella who is into it is totally worth the wait lol.

Thanks for sharing.

I had this story in my bookmarks from 2013. I love it when authors come back from such a long hiatus! It give me so much hope that all the other awesome stories out there that I was into will also be resurrected :) I'm so happy to see you back in fighting shape! Great chapter and even if it's just this one, you're awesome!

I'll take years-long updates over complete abandonment. Thanks for writing!

Getting back to your beginning chapter/s (as re-reading is a must to remember), there's something that didn't really ring true to me. That is that Bella was never attracted to anybody besides Rosalie (that 'does' ring true), and then when Rosalie 'claims' her, she is apparently a pro at having orgasms, and the lingo was more 'adult' from Bella's pov than would make sense to me (g-spot for example). Also, Bella's fun and flirty underwear is pretty abnormal for her never having been sexually active before.

But hey, it's all a world of fantasy, so it's all good.

But there's my critique.

Lady, I'm just glad that you didn't forget about this story.

Awesome! Thanks for the update.

update soon i love it

Wow...

Damn, I finished this and checked when it was last updated. 2013! That sucks. I hope you decide to pick it back up sometime! I love the interplay between the two women.

will you be continuing this? i hope you do and i hope that all is well with you