Wow. This was utterly AWESOME! Snake and Storm have always been my favorite and despite what fans and critics say, I freakin' loved the movie. I love the brotherly bond of this story and the artistic quality of this captures the ninjas' traits very well. Wish I could find more like this, well done. ;D

Brilliant.

Hi,

This was very well written! Not to mention it was perfect for the two. It was really great and could totally fit any of the series with them! Thanks!

~Lucky

BRAVO! simply wonderful and well written! :)

i love snake eyes! :)

This was a very good read. I alway's enjoyed stories about these two. I liked how well written it was and how it seemed to show something that most if they looked should see in the movie's and sometime's even the cartoon. Ja.

well done. i too have only been interested in the film. a very beautiful short!

Wow. I love this. It's short, simple, and to the point. I've never seen anything but the movie, either, and these are my favorite characters. This is very well written. I applaud you!

Beautiful.

Flawless.

wow for not knowing much about the ninjas you really hit the nail on the head I can't wait to read more of your stories

:O ... I DO know the characters a bit better than what was portrayed in the movie, and you certainly did a good job with this. I'm speechless here! There is a certain artistic quality in this, I think, that I can't ignore. Proof that even the shortest of stories can be absolutly amazing.

Very good! I love Snakes and Storm Shadow, and I always like the idea of them still being brothers, yet apart. D

Bravo!

-Snakes and Scarlett 4 Ever!-

nice...

Beautiful, I must say. You may not know much about these two characters, but I believe you have done a remarkable job of capturing the essence of their . . . bond, if you will. Well done.

~THE Psychotic Pyro Fairy

awesome. this is great i love what you did with this.