Reviews for Avatar: The Last Airbender Book Four: Air
Guest chapter 20 . 7/8
Thank you for making this, it has made me so happy because I just couldn't think right after watching alta because i needed to know more after the end of book three and this is just want I wanted.
Alex chapter 3 . 4/8
Ik korra didn't come out at the ti.s you published this but just so you know, Zuko had a daughter named Imzi who had a son named Iroh
Nikolai22 chapter 20 . 2/13/2016
FINAL REVIEW~
Great story!
IGN 10/10
Glad I gave it the chance!

Shitty ending tho, but with a story epic as so that i to be expected.
But maaaaaaaaaaan that was just one of those stories man.
Stories like this are the reason I hunt through all these old fics man.
Focused story and everything.
This story was so good tht the last few chapters made my balls ache (that's one of the highest compliments I can give, the story made that happen)

If you had nothing better to do though, there are some minor grammar and spelling errors that, while easy to understand what it actually meant, are still present.
An example is when Mai (or was it Katara?)
Says "I am helpless, I can take care of myself."
I'm pretty sure you just mean "I am not helpless".
Nikolai22 chapter 16 . 2/13/2016
Chapter 16~
I'm so hype for the next 4 chapters it is almost unreal...this so far is one of the best avatar fan fictions I have ever read, and I've been searching through very last one of them.
This is nearing the end, it will be glorious.
You are glorious for this story you created, my lord.
Nikolai22 chapter 12 . 2/12/2016
Chapter 12~
Holy shit!
City annihilation, damn.
Wish there was a way to tell wtf the demons were saying,

I may not have been paying attention to previous details but I'll just imagine what the demons look like and assume their armor looks similar to fire nation armor but black.
Nikolai22 chapter 11 . 2/12/2016
Finally commenting free chapter 11...
Story so interesting I kept on reading.
Good shit so far. Really good shit,
I must proceed further, read more.
Later, now I must rest.

(In other words this shit is really f***ing good but I'm tired as f*** and need to sleep lol)
ButtonPusherExtraordinaire chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
This is one of the best if not the best ATLA fanfic I've ever read. Im shocked more people havent read it amazing story and back story.
Alpha545 chapter 20 . 10/10/2014
So, this made me a happy guy. Reading this was a nostalgic experience. I know it's not really up to date with the lore, but it felt real enough. The characters were like they are in the show, which made it feel really believable. This didn't feel like any fanfic, but something much closer to the real thing. It was perhaps a bit grimmer with the death, dismemberment and blood things. But, so is the show when you watch it again, though still not as grim.
I enjoyed this very much, good job!
Avatar Fan chapter 20 . 3/30/2014
I LOVE THIS STORY. it is an amazing fan-fiction and the ending is very sweet
The Stars At Night chapter 20 . 7/22/2013
Beautiful story. I do have to say that this is one that I'm putting down as "legendary." I really do like how you wrote Azula and how you showed us(the readers) how she lived and looked at life. I'm looking forward to reading your other stories as well. :D
scottymacc chapter 20 . 4/13/2013
Great Story
Idea Persons chapter 20 . 8/30/2012
hey would you mind answering your reviews? I'd like to know if your story was turned into a graphic novel yet, your story is truly AMAZING and i really hope it will be turned into a comic because this is seriously very nice... I wish The Legend Of Aang wasn't finished yet I think they came too soon with Korra. Also I hope They start making episodes of The Last Airbender. But like a Peacefull ara Show what funny adventures the kids get into etc,

thx for your story, Good Luck!
Guest chapter 20 . 8/29/2012
Aang and Katara have twins?! I thought they had Three kids: Kya (girl), Bumi (Boy), and Tenzin (boy)!
Random Person chapter 6 . 8/26/2012
THANK YOU FOR WRITING A GOOD BELIEVABLE STORY I've just finished another avatar fan fiction and it sucked so hard that it kinda spoiled avatar when I re-watched it on my comp, but this story is real good and sort of heals my disgust for the other one. Love it!
PercyJacksonWillKickYourButt chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
How dare you!? Just kidding. Okay, because you wrote Iroh's song, I cried! It reminded me of a memorial poem I read on this site for Mako, (for those of you who don't know, Mako was the origanal vioce for Iroh, but after season 1, Mako died from cancer.) R.I.P. Mako. Let your role as Iroh be rememered in the hearts of any and all Avatar The Last Airbender fans. I'll miss you Mako! Forever and always.
92 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »