What their is no more? I want to at least know that harry and Derek are happy in the after life. but, now my soul just hurts from not knowing!

so you give them part of a happy end... and then let volldemort kill them...that is sad. hope that there will be a second part and this was only a possible Vision of future by ballion.

Derek and Harry never got their lemon TT

Well stab me in the heart why don't this was pretty good

did you make a end story where Harry and Derek are alive or something please say yes and post it. please

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
WHY, OH, WHY DID YOU DO THAT TO ME!

I loved the story absolutely hated the ending. I hate ending when they die like that... But I loved everything else.

you know, harry's pretty useless as a royal, seeing as as soon as Derek says so, he could no longer be a royal consort. Rothbart marrying harry would do nothing for taking over the kingdoms. Harry's just another commoner except for being in love with the prince. He holds almost no power without that title. Rothbart gains absolutely nothing by kidnapping him. Just thought i'd tell you.

Not really the happily ever after I was expecting or imagined! But still nice! A small epilogue would've been great!

At least Harry's with Derek in the end it's all good. :3

But Harry can't be apart of the chief and shamans family. He already has one?

Nice touch keeping to cannon Swan lake ending where it is tragic but happy at the same time.

Good work.

Rate 7.9/10

That...that is a horrible good ending, I did not see that happening.

...that's it? U killed them? GODDAMN IT! I don't blame ya, i blamed me. I should had understood the tragedy in ur genres and the hints that the seer gave to me. Usually I very much enjoyed angst endings, especially in a death!fics but for once in a life, I wished this one was one of those happily ever after endings.

I LOVE THIS CROSSOVER! There should be more of this type of things

A very nice but sad story.
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