Loved this. Can totally imagine Chase trying to set this up.

I wish I was awake enough to give a proper review but...

An excellent story as always! You captured the atmospheres of scenes with astoundingly accurate descriptions within so little words. I do admire that about you and wasn't disappointed in this piece to read your subtle brilliance.

The ending was well-written- probably couldn't have been concluded in any better way.

There were, of course, the off-side minor errors throughout the breadth of the story- mild ones such as writing 'brake' instead of 'break' or replacing a word with a similar sounding one that didn't quite meet up to the original meaning. Despite these mistakes, you manage to keep the structure of the sentence and also retain the majesty of the situation.

Great story and even greater ending!

Very nice story, thanks..

Love the cynical and sarcastic 'Author Notes' - I got just as much enjoyment from them as I did the fic itself..

:)

Slovenia , huh? Pretty good command of english!

Ye. That was fun. :)

What a lovely way to end such a wonderful story. You brought such emotions to the Characters it was been just like watching the show.

I got a chuckle from your note at the end. Hahahaha

This is a wonderful story. The ending was perfect. I'm looking forward to the next one.

That's a great ending for the story!

“I’m no rose. I’m more of a cactus or that meat eating plant.” lol, that just so true, but honestly, who could say no to him at that point?

I really loved that story and I think you're right about not writing a sequel. Sometimes, it's just better to take an ending as is it and not try to tell what's happening afterwards... I hope what I'm saying is making any sense ;) I better stop before it gets completely weird ;)

Great ending!

Can't wait for your new story

I absolutely love this epilogue!

And I think you are right: there shouldnt be a sequel. I love this story, really, but I think it is great as it is and anymore would just destroy the mood you built.

House is a cactus...what a fitting comparison! *laugh*

Its also very cute, how he just hands her the rose after minutes of uncomfortable silence...thats just: aw!

I am already looking forward to your next story...I got a thing for Hameron-Halloween-specials. *laugh*

Thanks again for writing this fantastic story, each chapter made my day.

Have a great day,

Isi )

lovely ending :)

i liked the rose bit

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lovely fic!

can't wait for new stuff

thank you!

That was a great ending! Very House & Cameron-like, perfect! Can't wait for your Halloween-story!

No doubt about it, I like this story. And I'll be there when the "halloweeny" one's out:)

that was mean to leave us hanging :)