Wow, That was a great one shot. I think it is great to see from Albus' point of view. !00% all the way!

Wow. This is intense. Great. Thank you very much. Wow.

This was so intense and pure that I really had to remind myself what their relationship became so that I won't sit in front my computer and sigh every second. I love the way you wrote Albus' thoughts. And I know how much fun it can be to write this pairing if you are in this special mood. :D

Beautifully written! I really think you captured what went through Albus' mind when it came to his lover; it can't have been easy for him to watch Gellert descend into madness-if Gellert didn't start out there. Still, love is hard to override. Very nice work!

Wow. That just sounds so in-character, so realistic. It sounds like something that happened in Dumbledore's life (which is obviously the point), or in anyone's life, really.

This piece captures their relationship so well; I love the feeling you write in it. And the sentence you used in the summary was absolutely gorgeous.

damn.

albus dumbledore is not sexy. albus dumbledore is not sexy. albus dumbledore is not sexy.

i think i need to set myself lines.

also, gellert is a world-ruining bastard. and is not sexy, in the same way young voldemort is not sexy.

*reminds self*

*scoffs at self*

also, love that you used british spellings. always a fan.

Wow, that was amazing. It was perfect - exactly how I imagined their relationship would bs. Passionate and powerful- but broken all the same. Great job ; I love how you portrayed Albus.