Wow, what a surprise! You added in this fic. Nice work!

Awesome chapter. Date with Destiny is my favorite Teen Titans episode.

Oh buck.

The chapter just cuts off right at the end there. You might want to fix it.

nice keep going its good

That must be blackfire,he just got the tamerian kiss,love the second chapter btw

Great chapter,i loved how you started off

Very good chapter, but I'm just wondering; what does Lance look like?

The end already? Wow, that was a surprise for me! Great story, I'm really looking forward to the next installments!

*giggle* Date With Destiny? This should be fun! And why haven't I favorited this story yet? *adds to favorites list*

Lol, I liked the end of this demo _ The story's coming along nicely.

Sweet, back with the Titans. _ But... you're not planning on having Terra go through the same things as originally in the show (running away, joining Slade and betraying everyone, turning to stone, etc.) here, are you? I've been hoping that this alternate storyline would allow for a different turn of events in which she ends up staying with the team, thanks in part to Lance's influence. I guess either way, it will be interesting to see how his part in the team effects events.

Because I support canon... I think there's only supposed to be one omnitrix. I think Azmuth said something about worlds blowing up if there's two omnitrix's in close range.

But then again, I may be wrong.

This story looks promising. The only things I have to say are 1) try to separate all dialogue onto separate lines so they aren't smushed into big blocky paragraphs and 2) watch out for Gary Stu!

Overall, good job!

Wow, you've been busy with this story, haven't you? _ I was wondering when you'd get back to it; now I see that you've been working on the alterations. It looks great - the minor grammar things I mentioned earlier have already improved greatly, and the plotline is flowing very well. Keep it up!

I really hope you keep this up!It's great!This is actually the first Ben 10 Fanfic i've Continue.