I love love love JK: reviews. They save me so much time!

Great story, thank you for sharing!

James and Tanya are dangerously deluded!

I’m loving this so far!

Thanks for writing this wonderful story!

So Edward sees in Jessica's mind that Bella has auburn hair, and then two seconds later he tells Alice that her hair is brown. Right. Looked up Mitsubishi Eclipse 2009. Not even really nice looking. Also, Edward would be insanely curious why Alice couldn't see Bella in her visions. Very out of character for all of the Cullens really. This story could be improved.

Sorry, but this is bullshit. Edward would of heard Tanya's thoughts. Plus Bella would not of left Edward's side if Tanya was there. What happened to the plan? Lame!

Okay the last two chapters were terrible, and I had to drop this fanfiction.

I loved it. Thank you for sharing. I especially loved Alice's personality and Emmet's joking around. Thank you.

oh god..Alice is being soooo fucking is by far the most annoying Alice I've ever read. she is literally giving me a headache. y can't she leave them alone..does she have to be like this? ughhh...I really want to kill her so bad. n Jasper is being completely has no right to be angry with anyone..N Emmet is being so crass...y can't anyone let them be.. they're newlyweds for fucks sake. are they not being unfair to Edward B has had their honeymoon bt y can't anyone let them be for theirs?

I love it so much.

Perfect work here, I shall continue.

Very interesting work here.

Amazing... I want more

Ugh Bellas so pathetic