It's a nice concept to start with. But i think it was a little too... late in the book's timeline

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Wow! You're chaos descriptions are awesome. And that's just typical of Luna; of all people, who else would turn out to be part of the Emperor's bloodline (or at least of one of his Primarchs; I assume that's who this mysterious blonde boy with her eyes is, but I guess we'll have to wait and see).
ps. Just wondering, have you read the graphic novel 'Bloodquest'?

Hmm... so Tzeencth has taken an interest in Hermione, tempting her w/her true "failing" - Her love of knowledge, and all it entails. (A shoe-in there!)

Harry, it seems is destined to raise Khorne's bloody banner; Not too surprising - abused children DO tend to be more able to do real violence. (and thanks to Dumbles, Harry's doubtless has enough rage to give Khorne a run for his money...)

Ginny being chosen by Slaanesh..? odd. but sort of fitting. Thanks to Molly Weasley Ginny's doubtless bursting at the seems w/repression - something Slaanesh will doubtless exploit! (although I could have just as easily seen Luna in that role...)

But your best selection..? was Father Nurgle. Ron. w/out a doubt is Nurgle's own. (...nuff said).

As for Luna..? That wasn't a young Sanguinius she was seeing, was it? (oddly, I could easily see Luna as a Blood Angel...)

Hope you continue this.

LCF

This is masterfully, and I mean that, masterfully written and the images and scenarios it invokes are staggering! The possibilities! You must continue this! This story is one that truly NEEDS to be expanded upon. To ignore it, leave it here incomplete, is like Father Nurgle snuffing out the flame of his cauldron!

This is a great fic, I hope you continue it. The characterizations are great, and raise some interesting possibilities.

Very interesting. So far only shadows of things to come. I look forward to seeing more of this

Interesting story so far. Can't for the next update. Was surprised that Luna got picked by the emperor.

Ouch. Love luna, pity the others are going to hell. Personally, while I feel you have the personalities pretty much pegged, I'd rather see Harry as the Emperor Reborn (or pre-born, or whatever).

this story is getting intresting power is worth any price am sure that harry and his freinds will find out finish this story

Keep going, this sounds interesting:)

A really cool, idea I love Warhammer and its crossovers are so few but there so awesome. Please keep this story updated it looks like it has a lot of potential.

o i like it, i cant wait till harry screams "BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD"

dumbles will have a heart attack on the spot lol.

What I don't understand is why no one ever realizes that calling for the aid of entities that feed off pain, agony and souls is a BAD idea. Especially as said calling basically marks you as theirs, forever.