I decided to attempt to give this story a second chance after previously stopping on chapter 9. I found Renesmee irritating but decided to give this story another shot...that's until I got to this line: "Why do I feel like I'm about to be raped and murdered by a bunch of smelly, hairy beasts?" I asked as Sam led me down the beach. This line is so rude and socially unacceptable and its the first line in chapter ten. I hate Renesmee's characterization. Its disappointing because I've read both 'Highschool is Hard Enough' and 'Hots for Teacher' which are both amazing.

What's the name of the fanfic you helped your friend with?

Reneesme is such a bitch and the good kind

I really enjoyed the characterization of both the wolves (minus Jake) and Cullens' (minus Nessie).

However, in my opinion, Jacob was a very unlikeable person in this story. Normally I wouldn't agree with Edward, but I thought he was spot on about Jake's disrespect of Nessie. I found him to be quite manipulative and selfish in the beginning of their involvement.

Nessie appeared to be a bit pretentious. That whole "throw my 'famous' name around" mall incident plus the "trying to force vampire-wolf" friendship was disgusting.

Hopefully, this doesn't come off as rude. I'm merely stating how I viewed this particular work.

This is one of the best stories I have read so far is hard to find a good Jacob and renesmee story

I enjoyed this, the humor that is so true and unexpected for Renesmee as a half vamp is really good. She is really funny with Jake. I read one of your other stories a while ago and just now had time to read something else you wrote. You wrote this a long time ago, it was probably one of the most original Jake and Nessie stories even then. Thanks for writing and leaving it posted.

loved it

Loved the start but I don't think I like this Nessie. Sorry.

He doesn't even know her name!

Love it already

Nessie is a bit irritating. I know she is suppose to come off kind of humorous but all I get is that she rude and annoying.

poor jake he's only a sexual toy...apparently it's all up to her family and especially her "daddy"; she doesn't have a say ("And I cant really desribe the bond I have with my dad, but its something that means the world to me." She looked straight into my eyes, "And I could never do something that he would hate me for.") where's her personality, does she have one? does she feel the slightest amount of love that jacob feels for her? she really is going to let him stand by himself against her family, isn't she? because the family and esp. daddy will be against. will she put the slightest effort to fight for them, or just whine in her dream for another good fuck with good old jakey? i bet on second

good fic it was nice read!

And once again brilliant writing...

"No! I spend all of my free-time banging your n-"

DEAD! That was a priceless line.

OMG, this story was seriously so charming. I love the ending, the middle, ALL OF IT. I hope someone finally told Jared he isn't crazy... Hahaha.

Seriously though, you're such a great writer, sorry for flooding you with 35 reviews in such a short time period! Or not sorry, if you like my review spam. LOL