Reviews for The Lost Chapter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It has been literal years since I first found and then lost this I am so glad to have found it again. It was great inspiration for me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My mind Is just Light~San ending up being the one to judge Matsuda~San Matsuda~San freaking out L~San peeking his head in wherever the hell or finally being noticed Matsuda~San freaks out more L~San and Light~San laugh a bit at his reaction Make a few dirty jokes And Matsuda~San goes to heaven! (Or hell xD) |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D I liked this a lot! I couldn't even watch past episode 25 and the first few episodes were so boring, once L came in Light's character became better and my view on the show was better. I completely agree with you about Misa or whatever her name is. I think she's just there because Light had to mercilessly use someone, why not be the annoying bitch? I like this ending better than the real ending! Of course, I've never actually seen the real ending, but I've heard about it! You made me re-like the show again :) |
![]() ![]() When I found out Ryuzaki was the Shinigami king I went OMK That is AWESOME |
![]() ![]() EveningBlack here! Oh snap! Oh snap! That was undeniable an awesome fic! So sexy! So smutty! So nosebleed inducing! Am I selling something!? Because I sound like it! Anywho, that was amazing. I literally threw my iPod on my bed and walked away when I read the Lawli was the Shinigami King (but of course I crawled back and continued). That was just amazing. Happy late birthday Ninja ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this story but the lemon made me blush0/0 plz write some more death note fics!_ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you played around with the plot and rules :3 It is awesome! O wow...that would be freaky to discover he died on your birthday *chills* point: Great story! :D |
![]() ![]() hm... usually i dont read these kind of stories, with the charictars being ooc.. but this one... was beautiful. great work. this was the best death note fic i have read so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I was totally blown away. It was creative, intense, and still sexy as all hell! I always wondered what happened to Light when he died, and i like this. I'm happy to see them together in this ending. I also feel that the Manga left you wanting more. But, L being the Shinigami King was just the best bonus EVER! I've always been a fan of the concept of L being the Seme who just lets Light top, so to see it played out is just awesome! This is getting favorited and thank you for writing such an amazing piece! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This HAS to be the real Lost Chapter! I mean, AMAZING! :D It really makes you wonder some stuff, and it really makes your mind wonder "what if...?" Really interesting :B xoxo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my godness! I'm totally fangirling over this right now! Your idea ofL being the Shinigami King is so unique and amazing! This is the best Death Note fanfiction I've read so far (considering that I've just recently started reading Death Note ffs it's not much, but oh well...) IMO you should have at least 100 reviews! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() ... And this is how the manga and anime should have ended. I never thought of the possibility of L being the Shinigami King, it was a great idea. I really like how even though L is the Shinigami King, Light is still the seme. I don't think he would be able to handle being L's subordinate in bed as well as the outside world. I really like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I seriously loved this story. Even though, yeah it was long, but holy crap it was definately worth the read 3 I loved L as the Shinigami King, and Light being a shinigami was just awesome, oh and the Lemon, was just an added bonus ;D Overall, awesome story, ) |