I'm starting to think you should have maybe given another thought to turning this new part into a sequel instead :D

I kinda like this whole debate, it's something that I find myself thinking about for a story I'm working on myself...

what? people didn't catch the speed dial? i thought it was rather obvious. I didn’t even question it. to me it eas obvious that the rest of the family would show up, I just didn't know if they'd have enough time

Hold up. The previous chapters weren't proofread? Damn! You're good!

This one's fun :D I laughed a lot

Ohh I'm so excited!

okay, i don't really understand why Edward had to show up to briefly ruin the action if it didn't have the purpose of breaking them up for now. it would have been understandable and a good tool if you wanted to introduce another issue that they'd have to deal with then. bjt just interrupting them for no apparent reason seems weird to me.

but otherwise a really good chapter

soo... Bella got over her kill fast.
that kinda buggs me but with everything else in this story moving a bit faster, I guess it makes sense

ooh. i really like this chapter!

well, isn't that just great!
You're really keeping the suspens-train going aren't ya?

oh shit. i knew the second that there was talk of a school dance that this wasn't going to end well. but I didn't expect this D:

yup. we're speed-running this, I see :D

shit. you move fast.

Beautiful story

Can someone just teach Bella how to use her gift tho... I can’t with her so weak and useless