I fell like a pervert but could u make a sequel

You totally should write a sequel to this fic.

Sashocirrione,

When I heard about there being a 'The Visitor II', I had to see what all the fuss was about with The Visitor I. While I can kinda tell that this is one of your earlier works (the smut scenes are a little bit different, a tiny bit less sophiscicated in some way), this is still excellent, none-the-less.

Now that I've read this, I'm actually seriously considering the idea that you yourself are male (although I've always thought of you as female for some reason), in fact, I'm almost completely certain you are. I'd like to know if I'm right, but I know you may lie to me and lead me off, telling me I'm right when in fact I'm wrong. I won't demand it of you, because I know I wouldn't appreciate it myself, but if I can get an answer, that'd be nice.

Yes, go ahead, I'd really like to see the sequel. It sounds excellent!

Keep it up, and get writing the sequel!

Ruin XXX

Wow amazing!

This was pretty hot. I love the closeness between L and Light, and how L focused on Light. As far the two of them sharing a woman, I am not too keen on that idea. L had already surmised that Light was gay. Just feel that it would be uncomfortable. The only way that it could work is if L hired a professional and whatever happens, do not bring Misa into the equation.

Whoa! I certainly wasn't expecting L to hire a prostitute or gigolo. Plus he admits that he is attracted to Light. Poor Light, caught in a situation that he never expected. And leave it to L to be have enough mind left while in the throes of sex to be able to make a comment on Light's state of arousal.

Am i the only one concerned about the book? IT WAS JUST DROPPED TO THE FLOOR AND LEFT THERE!

oh, and i loved your story :) veeeryy sexy, if i do say so myself, and i have read a LOT of yaoi in my time. Very well done INDEED... :D

omg yes plz!

Another disturbing though hot story! You really are great at writing strange lemons. C:

Ah L and his fetishes!

the one-shot with a woman wouldn't particularly be appealing to me... if it wasn't you who would write it! whatever you write will be interesting!

L is so cut and wierd: I laughed at the passage when L is suspiciously happier (just before a prostitute shows up!)

L, always so blunt... "you turn me on Light"

Harry Potter, a porn novel? XD

I thought it was pretty good.

But i haate the word penis.

like seriously

its such a weird word...

and cock, it bothers me and grosses me out.

XD

Loved the fix minue those two words hahahaha. Yeah I'm picky.

I have one thing to say... you rock! Awsome author, awsometastic author! You made it funny where appropriate and you write very well. I'm off to read more of your work, I hope to find more interesting story ideas.

You know because of you I actually MADE an FFNet account? I wanted to leave you feedback. I am a very quiet fan of yours. I've adored your work since that crazy motherfucker of a fic with L turning crazy dom at the end, hahaha. Anyway, this fic is fucking sexy and I want to throw in a request for its sequel. Thanks!

anser- that sounds so good...