| Reviews for My Queen |
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   Uday Sra chapter 18 . 2/19 good |
| Mista G chapter 10 . 1/4 I see a fake Lelouch at the end... Who *is* that? |
| Darksenin chapter 18 . 10/30/2019 Did someone knows if this stoy will continue or is it dead |
| w0if chapter 18 . 10/2/2019 how many lelouches are there now? i think i lost track... |
| EiNyx chapter 16 . 5/30/2019 I never could understand how easily Ohgi's involvement with a Britannian officer was so easily accepted. Ohgi is easily the most hypocritical and least likable character. |
| EiNyx chapter 15 . 5/30/2019 This was quite possibly the worst reveal I've read in a long time. You introduced an "evil clone" for the sake of this lazy literary device? This is a convoluted mess. It felt incredibly contrived and forced. I'm doubtful many were surprised by this. Never use an evil twin reveal again in a story. |
| s.k.f.f.f chapter 11 . 5/22/2019 it's fine, cant please all the fans |
| NPwall chapter 18 . 5/4/2019 nice chapter |
| G chapter 18 . 4/22/2019 I'm assuming the Dimensional Supervisor will intervene, especially with Leila in the mix, and she will save Lelouch from FLEIJA and teleport Jeremiah, who for some reason has recovered, along with Sayoko, to the battlefield so he can deal with the sleeper agents. |
| Jakeros chapter 18 . 4/22/2019 lol Divine Intervention, such is the basis for all Fanfiction. |
| Just a Crazy-Man chapter 18 . 4/22/2019 Love |
| shadowrunner22 chapter 18 . 4/22/2019 Whoa this was intense, I can't wait to see how it all plays out. |
| DinoGuy2000 chapter 18 . 4/22/2019 What a fight! Lelouch's forces are getting scattered and slaughtered, while Charles moved in for the final hit. Luckily, the aces are skilled enough to spread considerable destruction among the enemy ranks. Enough for Charles to move forces from the flanks. Still, that's quite a worrying ending. I can't wait to see how Lelouch survives if he does. Great chapter! Good work! |
| god of all chapter 18 . 4/22/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| KallenLelouch chapter 9 . 3/14/2019 You know after all the years this chapter has been out and I have reread this story a few time's, I have just notice a big error in this chapters setup. Before Kallen fights Chiba it goes: "This woman was every bit worthy to be the masters queen. She wanted to help her so she fought her fear and struggled to reach the woman's side. K allen lobbed a grenade as C.C gotten through and the two women made their way to the next door into the hall." It looks light you pressed enter as you were spelling Kallen's name. |
