love it!

Interesting:)

Wow- I really feel like you captured both Draco and Hermione so well in this. Really well written. I'm excited to read some of your other work!

Awesome you could totally make a fanfic out of this

️️Great :)

Well, hot damn! Slap my face and call me Bob, but who knew they came so desperate nowadays! (Sorry, practicing a new accent... :).)

This is so believable! I absolutely love it!

Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

not much non con, more like a dub con.

hmmm last line freaky O_O

Really good story... I like how you build up the emotions and that Hermione tells Draco to be careful at the end... Lovely :)

Loved the ending of this short...this one is the best so far that I've read.

This is good for many reasons :D One - it's simple but it's still freaking brilliant. Two - Your characterisation of Draco and Hermione not only in this fic but also other stories is top notch. Three - You finished this fic in a way that still connects with the main topic and how the story came about, unlike something that is completely random.

You've probably heard all this before but all well :) Great job!

I loved this story. That's an extremely crappy review, but it's the truth. I must say though that I loved how you ended it without ending it. I mean, there was no happily ever after. I just...was...and I liked that. Thoroughly enjoyable. :D

You have so much potential, but you just need to connect your sentences. The paragraphs are choppy and almost difficult to read, so just connect sentences, use commas, get a beta, anything.

Your writing is too good to go to waste. ]

loved it3.

Good job! I like the idea-it's simple, and it works, because it's not too complicated a piece. Nicely written as well! Keep up the good work. ~Jenn