That was really cute. I had a smile on my face the whole way through.

Living on a prayer? You are really medium :)

Thanks for the very good read

love that the song you used here is the one they used in 7x08 but in reverse :-P love this oneshot those two are good to each other :-D

NO NO NO NO . MY EYES ARE JUST ... SWEATING ? (THEY DO SWEAT RIGHT ?)

I LOVED THAT SO MUCH I JUST MADE A VERY INHUMAN NOISE AND OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE AND AAAAAAA!

This is beautiful, one of the best fanfiction I've ever read maybe the best. You should be a romance writer. Please write more!

yeah I know I'm really late to review on this one but I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely loved it!

And btw, my favorite line:

Sure, it was nice to see a different side of him, but she wasn't sure she wanted to see it all the time. She was a fan of his usual self.

Nice chapter! Favorite line: "It was about your wife and daughter, wasn't it?" She asked, expecting him to nod. Instead, he shook his head. He took her face in his hands, staring deep into her eyes. Something about the intense, dark stare made her want to squirm out of his hold.

Aww very nice.

Favorite line:

“You’re alright. I’ve got you.” He said, letting his face rest on her shoulder. She wrapped her arms around him, letting the words sink in. It took a couple minutes, but she eventually got it.

"She pushed up on her tiptoes to press a soft kiss to his cheek. Right now, he needed the comfort." - A right line.

"His fingers graced her cheek, and she opened her eyes. His intense stare caught her off guard, and she felt her heart flutter under her hand.

“You look beautiful right now.” He whispered, his fingers running down her jaw line and to her neck. She tried to stop the shiver that was threatening to rip through her spine." - Chilling, amazingly descriptive words.

"She wrapped her arms around his waist, pressing her cheek to his shoulder. He looked over his shoulder at her, smiling. He couldn't help but notice she was wearing his shirt.

“Something smell good?” He asked, and she shook her head softly.

“No, actually your humming got my attention. Bon Jovi, right?” She asked, and he chuckled. She flattened her hands over his stomach, the feeling of his muscles contracting giving her butterflies.

“Yes, Bon Jovi. Any protests to it?” She shook her head, rising on tiptoes and kissing the side of his face.

“Good Morning Patrick Jane.” She said, grabbing the plate and moving to the table. He watched her, and a grin broke on his face when she started to hum the song. He moved to sit next to her, taking her hand in his own.

“Good morning to you too, Teresa Lisbon.” He said with a smile, finally believing those words."

The intimacy there is well placed, and so true. They do have a lot of small touches and intimate moments.

ah omg i love that songg! my heart kinda swelled i guess? i kinda gasped for breath when i saw it, i was like AMAZING! BAMM!

pardon my randomnes. great great work. lovee it. make more like itt!

OK Izzy, I hate to tell ya but...THAT ROCKED! I loved the Bon Jovi part! I was actualy singing that song last night! Weird. It was very fully and cute and sweet! DUDE! We could build a teddy bear with all that fluff! YAY! LOL! I'm kinda hyper right now! Oh just one thing Lisbon's name is spelled Teresa, but other than that, AWSOME! Hope to see more Mentalist stories from you!

omg LOVE IT! That was so beautiful. I absolutely loved it. You write their characters so well! It was so true and soulful and absolutely awesome in every way! Great job. Loved it.

Oh and my favourite line? "She pushed up on her tiptoes to press a soft kiss to his cheek. Right now, he needed the comfort." Sque! Perfect moment. Oh and Livin on a prayer is one of my fave songs ever! And it so suited this lol.

Loved it. Great work honey! I hope we see more Mentalist stuff from you soon. I would never have guessed this was your first one if you hadn't told me. Take care. Jenn xx

oh wow, i loved it :P