Reviews for Day 4: X Marks the Spot
Sebastian chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
I've just finished reading your last chapter and guess I owe you at least a little review.
Your story is truly amazing ! That's pretty rare finding some fanfictions which have a such quality level.
I'm a big fan of 24 and an even bigger fan of the X-Files.
You have mixed both universes (which are not that different) with a great talent.
As every X-Files's fan, I'm waiting for the third and final movie, but I wonder if it will ever be made someday.
Have you ever thought to write another 24/X-Files Xover that would take place the 12-21-2012 ?

- Here is a short list of the parts I have preferred.

- The meeting with all the CTU's members, Mulder, Scully and President Palmer, when Fox Mulder has to explain to the president
that the next strike in New York's Subway involves an alien virus.
- When Scully encounters Covarrubias and snaps her. Generally the character of Dans Scully in your whole story
who is a very strong woman again , unlike the two last seasons of the show (especially the last one).
- The choice of the main villain Christopher Anderson, who is my preferred 24 villain just behind Nina Myers.
- The progression of the belief of the non X-Files characters in the probable existence of an extraterrestrial life form.

As you can guess, I wish I read the end of your story ! Do you expect to write it and post it someday ?
I know I should have written more reviews; I have read your story on my smart phone and it's not that easy to type.
I apologize for my english, as you may have probably noticed, I'm not an English native !

Regards !
Aaron W chapter 24 . 4/26/2012
Talk about things heating up. Sark accepting the deal. (We know that things are bad that Sark accepted with being his usual self) Kim being a carrier, and Henderson doing something to Syd and Vaughn. Things are going out of control. Hopefully all three can be saved. Love to see what happens next
Michael Weyer chapter 12 . 5/2/2010
Ah, nothing like a Sark appearance to brighten a story up. Truly enjoyed Sydney going Jack on him in the interrogation and can't wait to see more of his presence in this tale.
Aaron W chapter 11 . 4/23/2010
This chapter has more turns than a maze. Sydney's picking up some of Jack's habits. I don't know if that's a good or bad thing. Chloe is a little hurt that she's not in the loop until now. Monica, Jack and the rest are playing catch up. Mulder is leading some people because Syd ordered them to. Things are getting wild. Love to see what happens next, and if that have a chance to slow down. I do hope Nadia and Jack does get some much needed rest if they survive this, not to mention Syd, Vaughn and the rest. This is good keep it up
Aaron W chapter 9 . 3/26/2010
I do like the series so far, seeing how Jack and co are adjusting to Mulder and Scully's world things are heating up and Seems like Nadia is getting into as well. Love to see what happens next. I love how you merge 3 series together. I wonder you could involve Fringe with it as well. Can you imagine Marshall and Walter Bishop having an interesting chat?
Aaron W chapter 8 . 2/4/2010
Great new chapter, and I just love how Mulder is driving Sydney and Jack crazy. Scully is just going along for the ride, and Nadia is just being such a calm and cool customer (I can't help it Jack and Nadia make a lovely couple, they do complement each other) Kim has came into her own, and Vaughn is Vaughn. It's going to be interesting to see how Jack and Co will try to stop the attack. it will be interesting. Love to see what happens next
Aaron W chapter 7 . 2/3/2010
I like the crossovers between the two shows, great how you made an AU out of this series. I love to see what happens next, and seeing how Jack's, Sydney's and the rest world is changed because they're helping Mulder. I haven't seen a new chapter in awhile. Love to see what happens next
AshWeeeeee chapter 6 . 1/12/2010
I totally don't normaly read cross overs but I like this one.

:)

it's good.
Anonymous chapter 6 . 1/8/2010
You are one of the few authors on site who makes snese out of two of my least crossover fiction. I only wish more authros would have your writing talents in the crossover section, just hours ago I was reviewing a girl's poor fiction, it was really sad, she had great imagination but poor english and writing skills.

I consider all those who lack writing talents should not be in fanfiction or be told in a constructive manner, their mistakes so they can improve on their writing skills.

The only problem I have with this fiction is that I would have liked to see more chem between the characters, you spend a lot of time working on the plot, the intrigue and it worked, but you fortgot that every good writer works on the chem in his or her characters first for the story to be good.

so long
Aaron W chapter 6 . 1/6/2010
I've been a fan of 24 and Alias for a long time. It's really interesting to see Jack Bauer and Sydney Bristow work together. Sad to see people go, Weiss, Dixon, and others. I like to see what happens next. You do stay true to the 24 format, and of course Jack and Co. not believing the world that Mulder and Scully live in. I love to be the fly on the wall when they all receive proof. Since 24 is going to be premiering its new season this month I love to see how you put this new season and the last two into your 24/Alias universe. Keep it up it's good so far