Not sure I cared for the story

Awesome ty

Nice. Concise. Full of romantic energy!

write more omg tthis is very good

This is amazing! please you have to write more!

I love this story so much, I'm so thankful you wrote it! Spock is absolutely amazing, and this story really highlights that. Just made my day!love You!

MOOORE!

Next! Next! Next! Next!

nice story :)

Love it! Very lovely! ;)

More Please. ;D

OK now you are just teasig us! Another great story!

I found this story rather enjoyable; however, I do have some comments.

1) Paragraphs would be nice. At first glance, it just appears as one continuous long paragraph, rather hard to follow.

2) I found it difficult to follow the dialogue between Spock and Nyota since you have everything bunched touch. I suggest spreading things out, make it easier for people to read and understand what's going on

3) There are a few times, especially towards the end of the story, where you start to mention their names quite a bit, almost every line, or every other line. I.E: "Spock remained on the couch, he looked over at her seat to see she had left her bag. Spock reached to grab it when his door opened again." This is most likely just a personal issue I have but I find that grammar and spelling is something I get vocal about, even if I misspell or use improper grammar.

I have not read your previous story yet but I will make a note to do so. If you are in need of a beta reader, I will be more than pleased to assist you. Do not take what I am saying to heart. I am not trying to insult you or your creativity, merely giving you helpfully suggestions. I look forward to reading your other story. If you get a chance, look for a story titled Learning to Breathe. I sense you are a fan of the Spoura [Spock/Uhura] paring. My story centers on Spoura. I believe you might find it enjoyable.

As a side note, I realize that Spock has somehow discovered a way to mind-meld with me

I joke about that last part. Anyway, good story. Take note of my suggestions please and take care. I look forward to more stories from you.

More,more,more! Spock is so tender. It makes your heart melt.

oh this is awesome! I love it D it's so cool

and very sweet )