Strange yet fitting idea, I liked the ending :)

I like the last two lines. Your flow is wonderful.

This is beautiful. It's so sad, and yet so cute at the same time. Angst is clearly one of the main genres here. Usually, I tend to lean more towards reading long stories such as one-shots, but after discovering your fics, I'm starting to gain a new love for short, sweet drabbles like these! :'D (and of course the fact that Jerza is my OTP doesn't hurt) Thanks for writing this, I love it!

I like the way you write this pairing. :)

There's a poetry in this that I can't help but admire. One of my favourite pieces on this website - it's gorgeous.

i dont know what to say to your fics anymore...all that comes to the mind is beautiful. but it never seems enough...heck, i really dont know what to say. just please keep writing fairy tali. :)

Heartbreaking. What a beautifully written piece! It read like a dream and has settled like a bruise, and I am in utter adoration of your portrayal of Erza (who, by the way, comes across as remarkably in character considering the scenario you put her in). Powerful and longing, breakable and enduring - these are some of the things I've seen in her character through reading the manga, and in here, they came across. Thank you.
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Absolutely stunning.
Jerza is so bittersweet isn't it?
I like them anyway.

I really liked the coin analogy you used to describe Jeral. He's a hard character to pin down, and you did it brilliantly.

Whoa, that ending was just perfect.

Angsty, pretty :)

So much feels in this piece. Absolutely beautiful. 3

Most tragic pairing of this anime ever. ;( and that was excellent.

This was angst but beautiful. As with all your writing, it somehow works despite being concise. I really have no major criticism.

Beautiful, beautiful! ;_; "He never plays by the rules, and she should have known better. He's like a coin spinning through the air, one side light and one side not, while she holds her breath and waits to see which side falls face-up. But she hadn't thought both sides could be wiped smooth." -oh, this si so spot-on! I really loved this one.