Reviews for Harry Potter and the Veela Girls
Ayelen Yamila chapter 24 . 2/26
hello I hope you make a sequel to this story, it would be good if you make up to book seven, surely many ideas will occur
Guest chapter 24 . 1/18
Thanks for this amazing work!
riskeybusiness chapter 24 . 12/4/2019
Great story, well written plotline. Thanks so much for sharing it.
JenDamn chapter 4 . 6/15/2019
This story is good. :o) However you suck with French accents, lol. Still, that's a hard thing to write, and I'm not interested in this story because of your portrayal of the French language or their accents.
andrewpine chapter 14 . 6/3/2019
It's experiencing not experimenting,two totally different things.
andrewpine chapter 13 . 6/3/2019
This is getting very did those old bastard think it was fine to keep this from her,especially her own father?
andrewpine chapter 11 . 6/3/2019
It's losing heart not loosing.
If Snape and Madam Maxime know what the he'll is going on between those two why are the asshats not telling them?
It's tiny not tine.
When is she going to grow up and talk to Fleur?
andrewpine chapter 6 . 6/3/2019
Going so well until you used off instead of of .can't figure why some people can't tell the baffles the hell out of me.
andrewpine chapter 4 . 6/3/2019
You do much better then some English-speaking writers on this least you know the difference between of and off and form and from.
chloe1011997 chapter 24 . 4/19/2019
Brilliant story.
andrewpine chapter 24 . 4/5/2019
Looking forward to the it will be as good as this was.
andrewpine chapter 12 . 4/4/2019
When will we find out who Hermione's parents were? I have a feeling that one of them is a teacher at the school.
andrewpine chapter 11 . 4/4/2019
Their bull headedness is starting to get boring.
It is experiencing not experimenting.
She Caught not she catch

I am fairly sure that Harry made it through everything that happened to him due two things,Hermione and pure dumb luck.I am beginning to believe that he is actually dumber then Ron and that is saying something.I believe if it wasn't for Hermione leading him and Ron by the nose the story would have ended with Hermione dueling with Voldemort instead of Harry because he would have been dead.
Also as bright as Hermione is she should have found what Harry needed to breath under water months ago.
andrewpine chapter 10 . 4/4/2019
Held him still.
Cheers.
amazing thing's
Front.
It began to squirm.
Friends antics.
Free elf.
Even Fleur.
Lose her gaze.
andrewpine chapter 6 . 4/4/2019
A smirk Camelot people that read these stories know she is French why both writing what she says with a French accent just write in English .
Why is Snape penciled with her and Hermione?
Tiny,perfect .model.
When will Hermione pull her head out of her ass and let Fleur explain to her what is going on between them?
Still waiting to find out why Snape is even involved
Swedish
I'm announcing not commentaring.
She had a plan.
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