Reviews for Wrong, All Wrong
Evanesco-Muffliato chapter 5 . 6/10
Oo I like this story. Are you still planning to update it?
Azalea Lily Potter chapter 5 . 5/13
Please continue it! It's such a great story and now you've left on a cliffhanger. I really want to know what's next.
Warrior chapter 5 . 4/10
Great story complete it.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 5 . 3/1
To put things in simple terms is to spank James and Lily along with Dumbledore for what they have done and that it should be done by The Potter Twins. the twins are The twins who lived not the Boy-Who- Lived bullshit. And the fact that they are magical twins. And the two are needed to work together by combing their Powers to defeat Voldemort. Canon or not I find the Wizarding World to be filled with daft morons and idiots. And don't have much for common since and critical thinking skills. In fact most twins feel like something is missing weather identical or fraternal that goes for triplets. One of my Grandmothers was a triplet two girls and a boy. The girls identical. Her siblings where stolen at birth and her parents lied to but the family found out the truth plus she said that it helped explain why she felt that something was missing. In this case her siblings sadly my great grandparents never learned the truth but the others found out and told my grandmother the truth. she said it was one of her aunts' and uncles' who told her.
Qtsarahanne chapter 4 . 2/19
Great new chapter thank you!
Qtsarahanne chapter 3 . 2/12
Great new chapter thank you.
d1n0s chapter 2 . 1/30
Looking forward to more Aster Potter.
Qtsarahanne chapter 2 . 1/30
Great new chapter thank you!
Flame Wolfe chapter 2 . 1/29
This looks like Interesting story This was good chapter and I’m looking forward to the next one
Qtsarahanne chapter 1 . 1/24
Great start to the story I look forward to more, thank you!
Lord Geovanni chapter 1 . 1/23
You deleted your original story? That is honestly very upsetting.
parchmentandpencils chapter 12 . 8/5/2019
Wait... ASTER RIDDLE?
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 14 . 5/29/2019
This Chapter is the final straw. You are a complete idiot and brain dead why is it so few Authors do see or refuse to look at an obvious solution to all this bullshit. The Queen with the Prime Minister is the Obvious Solution to this mess Because They would send in The Royal Military especially The SAS and The RAF Plus they would use the Military Intelligence. The queen Would Arrest Dumbledore Abolish the Military revoke all of their Charters and Treaties Plus She would also brief all of the Local Police Agencies around the Country including Scotland Yard. Plus knowing the Queen she would Strip James of his rights to the Boys and Give Lily Full Custody since she finally realized her mistakes. Even she knows it is not a good idea to separate Twins Considering There have Been Twins in the Royal Family even though she never had any herself Plus there's the Fact I and A Distant Cousin so I should know So you better reunite the Twins in the Next chapter or two And Get the truth out dealing With the Potter Twins that night. Because it is not the Boy who lived But the Twins who lived And each one was affected by that damned curse but in their own way. And the two together balance each other out and also make it where the two should think clearly once together. The Two get too damned distracted they need each other to stay focused. Plus for their magic to work properly and meet their full potential they need to be together and in physical contact. Yes, one may be more powerful but by combining their abilities they would do far better. Plus Harry would be the way he is if he had stayed with his brother. And James is to damned immature to be a father. And he is to damned stupid to realize he is being manipulated. I wouldn't be surprised that all the Fing idiots that are loyal Dumblebutt have had compulsions and potions used on them. Aster seriously needs to learn to never accept anything from DumbleF.

I don't like Swearing but to damned much has been posting me off lately.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 2 . 5/29/2019
Both twins are being affected by the Separation but the stinking adults are too damned stupid to realize it.

Considering the fact that Aster and Harry were conjoined Twins but were separated by means of surgery. But were still with each other until asshole Dumbledore and James had the Twins Separated. And as a result, have always affected the twins but when together The Twins did a lot better both physically and mentally. So as a result if I had my way I would whip everyone involved for separating the twins. And it would be Quite severe.

I am really getting sick of this shit. Aster is a complete idiot he keeps cooperating. And I have a bad feeling That boy is using potions to manipulate the boy.

Ugg Aster believing the wand bullshit. When other magic users don't use wands. The African nations never use wands. In fact, many other parts of the World don't use magic.
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 11 . 5/29/2019
Another thing as someone who has twins and triplets that run in the family. One thing I know is separating multiple from each other is the worst mistake anyone could make I know such a separation badly affected my maternal grandmother who was a triplet two girls and a boy with the girls being identical. Plus I have heard of other multiples suffering from being separated. In fact, I went to school with multiple sets of Twins, Triplets and even a set of quads. And when something happens to one the other(s) feel it. Plus situations where one twin survives at birth and the other does not it leave the survivor feeling empties and knowing that something is missing it is especially bad for the identical twins. And chronic mild depression. I had one classmate whos twin died at birth. In fact, she was from a family where her parents had nothing but multiples and naturally at that mostly twins but they had triplets and Quads too. Not one pregnancy was a single birth.
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