Hi. Well first of all, I must tell you that I like the story but you are very slow. since chapter 18 you are more or less very slow. you do not advance in history. you got stuck in koga and sesshomaru, in their fight like inuyasha and koga. I would like you to go further with respect to the well, the return to the future of kagome, and such things. please go ahead. the last chapters bored me. It was more of the same that you have written. Hopefully advances .. I will follow you to know how you continue. Besides, it is a pity that you still haven't finished it with so much time that you published it. regards

It really bothers me that you just randomly choose to make another paragraph in the middle of a sentence... just to make something less cluttered. I honestly didn’t even read the first chapter because of how it was set up.

Omg! Yes! Thank you thank you thank you for picking up this story again. I started reading this when I was 17 and now I am 28 and just got back into reading fanfictions. I'm so happy to see this story again and the writing is as good as it was years ago. I was so surprised when I saw the title and was like no way, last updated this year? No fricken way! It brought back so many good memories of staying up late just to finish another chapter. I'm so excited for the next chapter, and am willing to wait another 10years to read more of it. Thank you so much! Stay safe and healthy out there!

love it, kiss

Don't skip lines in the middle of the sentence

Vaya y yo que pensé que nunca se iba a terminar, ahora a leer del comienzo que no me acuerdo como iba el desarrollo :u

I can't wait for the next chapter. This is awesome.

Interesante. Tengo curiosidad de saber como progresa esta relación. Si se quedara o regresara. Y si regresa seshomaru al fin la recordara?

2019 y no hay actualización :'v

c00l

Yup this is a fantastic adventure story!
I like how you put kagome sesshomaru and kouga together on their quest.. hahahhaa..
Its not fair that you have this creative idea and not finish them..
This is sad..
Hope you continue to write more and eventually
finish this story up ;)

Next plis

Can you please go back and make the paragraphs continue to the end of the sentence? It is a little hard for me to read when a new paragraph starts in the middle of another sentence and they are only "3-4" sentences long. It's okay to have small and large paragraphs...

I loved it I can't wait for u to update

i was literally crying out "WHY WHY WHY" when after finishing this chapter, I couldn't find the NEXT button huhu
It's just that...finding fics like yours with adventure and serious plot going on with likeable characterization of the casts is not easy...and and and I want more ;'(

Anyway, Please please please update soon