That's so sad it made me cry but why will prime make bee leave and how did sam die,megatron?

oh shit, damn bee please don't turn into megatron

Q_Q *sniff* You wouldn't happen to have an extra large box of tissues would you? *sniffles* Poor Bee and Sam. Bad Optimus! See what you did?! *sniff* I'll go hide under my covers and mourn in silence while Bee hunts down Optimus now- thank you (not) very much...boo hoo...

Lol anywho, the story was very good despite it's length. Actually quite good considering not many people are able to create a good plot without going into something lengthy. :)

There is something about this that I absolutely adore. I would LOVE to see a... sequel? I don't actually think a sequel is right but a vague description of what happens would be awesome. Like, 50,100,1000 years later or something. How things worked out with Prime. Idk. Maybe it's perfect as is and this feeling is exactly as its supposed to be. Just letting you know I love it.

this is JUST GREAT! i like the idea of a con bee . i hope you continue with the story because this have a great beginning !

'Con Bee? RUN FOR YOUR LIVES! Nicely done.

Aw.. Bee. ;n;

this made me so sad and the fact that it was prime who kept them apart made it even worse if u ever write a sequel for this i'm sure it will be awesome :)

Oh my gosh, poor Sam! Poor Bee! Anyways, this is a really brillant, dramatic fic. The emotions are well portrayed, and the dialogue is amazing. Well done!