Reviews for Five Firsts
The Trupe chapter 1 . 4/25/2016
Amazing
X-Ray Hearing chapter 6 . 2/24/2012
Good, Ron didn't cave in!
X-Ray Hearing chapter 5 . 2/24/2012
This was the dumbest fight ever. Hermione is a complete psycho here...what is the big rush to get married? She acts like it's the key to happiness...news flash, many married people are not very happy.

I don't know what her problem is, but she'd better apologize to Ron. But after reading the relationship dynamic of the two in this story, you'll have Ron grovelling to her in the next chapter even though he hasn't done anything wrong.

I guess they'll have the perfect relationship, because Ron will just give Hermione what she wants, no matter how irrational it is. But it's hard to call him a man if he doesn't stand up for himself. We'll see what happens in the next chapter.
the.gleeful.house.elf chapter 6 . 9/2/2011
PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I CAN'T HAVE THEM BREAK UP! NNOOOOOOOOO!
Vj86 chapter 6 . 4/15/2011
I loved the captured moments.. And even though it ends on a not so happy note.. I managed to add up the story till it matches the epilogue of DH.. :) sorry dont do very well with angst especially in cases of Ron and Hermione.. I love the narration and story is pretty erotic too.. Well written and well characterized.. Kudos...
idol269 chapter 6 . 9/18/2010
Ron's right. It's not his job to chase after Hermione every time she gets upset, especially after he does something wrong. Having to fix every mistake you AND your partner make for the rest of your life doesn't sound so appealing, does it? If Hermione means what she says she needs to show him that she can be there for him like he's there for her.
idol269 chapter 5 . 9/18/2010
It seems that all Ron did wrong here was not do exactly what Hermione wants. She didn't even tell him why she was upset, she's just angry with him. Why does it surprise her that Ron can't read her mind? She's constantly making jokes to others about how "thick" he is. She didn't show him very much respect here. Hermione has some explaining to do.
idol269 chapter 3 . 9/18/2010
Sorry, Hermione, but this is your fault. You haven't seen each other in months and when you do see him all you can do is homework? Can't you do that at school? Ron's given you understanding when you went back to school; it'd be nice if you returned the favor. He deserves better than to always be on the back burner.
stephers1234 chapter 6 . 8/29/2009
ah! i love it! so heart-wrenching. please tell me you're going to continue?
STG not logged in chapter 6 . 8/18/2009
what...the...fuck? Lol I am so mad at you but I love this story SO much that its like a silmutaneous pain and happiness. oh god not too many stories do that to me. You definitely need to write a first make up or a first epiphany-about-their-relationship idk but omg please write a sequel or something because I am going to die if you end it like this. But otherwise GREAT GREAT GREAT story. I really do love it. if I felt like logging in, i'd add it to my favorites but alas i must come back some other time.
Kayla chapter 6 . 8/9/2009
This story is so sweet, but so sad. Poor Hermione.

You should do a sequel, though, I can't get enough of these.
itsi3 chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
*sniff* That's so sad! oh man! That's definately an Awsome ending though!

OH I'ld LOVE to see some more firsts!

~Crystal
itsi3 chapter 5 . 8/7/2009
Aw so sad! I LOVE that he called her 'Mione! Such a cute nick name! I may name my daughter Hermione just so I can call her Mione!

So sad! I'm so glad you have a second part to this cause that's a HUGE cliffy!

~Crystal
itsi3 chapter 4 . 8/7/2009
Awsome job! Nice Lemon!

~Crystal
kutnerlove chapter 6 . 8/7/2009
aww, god, that's so sad. Brilliant work, though!
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