Just saw your update on your profile and I just wanted to say I’m rooting for you! I love this story so much I’ve read it about 3 times now! I can not wait to read more of Paul and Anna!

Paul's last name is LAHOTE, say it with me: LAHOTE
-.- idiot

why a pearl ring? that's stupid

this chapter could've gone a lot better. honestly the house is practically Paul's so he would've been well within his rights to have the Cullens leave as well as Jake (despite Jake being an Alpha). Also Emily OBVIOUSLY didn't think things through when it came to inviting the Cullens over; it doesn't matter if Paul's mom liked them, Emily and Paul's mother should've known that recovery from an attack (any kind of attack) takes time. people might not show it but it IS a WELL KNOWN FACT. Honestly I was expecting Paul to let some of his anger seep out and make EVERYONE there realize what I just wrote, but apparently YOU the WRITER didn't even think about that

I really like your writing style, it makes for smooth reading. I love this funny sarcastic Paulit's brilliant that we're seeing things from his point of view. I really like his relationship with his mother, there's alot of love there. I know it hasn't been updated in a while but it is not a bad spot to have stopped at.

Fun story. Update soon plz

This is excellent- I really like that Paul had doubts, and that his mom understood them. I teared up a little.

Anna is a neat OC, I'd prefer a bit more from her perspective, though. I do like that this is mainly Paul-centric, I would just like a bit more from Anna than there is presently.

Thanks for writing this, I really enjoyed it.

LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE

I really enjoyed that story. I would really enjoy reading more...

Loved It!

That was so adorable! Thanks for writing this!

I just read this whole freaking thing and I loved it. I don't even like Twilight and it's 1:41 in the morning and I'm exhausted, but I loved this story. It's all I've been reading for the last day. I'm exhausted, but chances are that I am gonna go look at what else you've written.

Paul was a major dick in this chapter. Why doesn't he want his mom to be happy and have a relationship with Someone? And he should be happy for her getting the apartment instead of acting like a child. Paul is a brat.

OMG Please update! This story is the best.

This is the best Paul/OC I have ever read.
I know it's been over two years but please update!