Reviews for First Time
AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 1 . 2/18/2017
Love the story - except for the name Adam.. Oh, well that's a small piece of a wonderfully touching story..
ugh chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
the use of the name 'adam' was so cringe-y
bite-me-im-irish chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
Great! Definately how their first time would have happened!
I-de-BadBad-Wolf chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
very sweet story and very emotional. Thanks for writing!