Wow this looks really interesting. Love the writing style. You can just feel his apathy to the situation. I don't know if I'm just looking in the wrong places but this if the first story I've seen with the Nine Tails taking over the host.

Interesting start.

I wish you come back to this... Still a good read.

Ooh, this is nice! I saw the first version of this, and you're right, this is much better. :) Your style of writing really absorbs me (it reminds me of mine in a way, just not with the stuff I'm writing on FanFiction). I really just love this. :)

Interesting so far.

Update? Please? Pretty please? With sugar ontop?

I stumbled upon this today quite by accident and my curiousity is peaked...Soo...I'm begging you to either let readers know this is a oneshot, or if you've discontinued it, ...or update? :)

Lol

Interesting. Profoundly different from the original - will there be more of nightfall?

what did i just read?

cool

Wonderful story i hope that i can see more o.o.

It really is completely different than Echoes.

interesting bew story, best of luck with it. i liked how much detail you put in to the kyuubi's thoughts

SD: Well only thing I wonder is if this story going have any of the old element in it, plot wise, or should I just forget about it completly? But anyway it goes I'm looking forward to your writing. So wish you good luck with this story.

This story looks like its going to be awesome! Keep up the good work. :D

I liked the beginning of the original better. Everything up to the point where Naruto died was excellent - very emotional.

But, I like this better than the second half of the first chapter of the original.

That was so incredibly dry.

If you could cut and paste the first part of that chapter to this it would be perfect.

What an unexpected and pleasant surprise this story is. I can already tell it's going to be a favorite.