Wow, this was fucked up but really good. I was a little confused as to who Near killed but that was my fault, I read really fast and sometimes miss words. Thanks for giving me a good new song to listen to when I'm depressed /s

Wow. This was wild from start to finish. Good job.

Awww, that's so sweet, but so sad. Shinigami you have a talent for writing angst. ;-;

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wtf...O-O FTW HAPPENED! chocolate did this?

yhu should eat chocolate more often..

loved it.

I thought it was fantastic!

WAAHHH! This is me screaming my head off D8

I thought MattxNear was weird BUT OMG, THIS WAS SUCH A POWERFUL STORY! I'm like all shaken up! My mouth. Will not. Close. THAT is what you call a jaw-dropping story! I...can't even say any more x-x Well Done.

YHS

xDelfin

I kinda liked it I mean it was grim and morbid( no offense)but really think I liked it, is that creepy?

You... What...

Aah... Don't really know what to say...

Fan-bloody-tastic!

And deep

Dark

Depressing

The three D's

sad...

So sad...

if this is what you do when you have chocolate then i am so dang glad your not like mello,otherwise i fear for my life,you would rule the world i think,and not in a good way

Wow. That was.. Deep. .. Very good story. Very good. I loved it. Made me cry. Uawawawa. I loved ittt~~~~3

It was unique. I liked it. :)

Incredible. Very out of character, but you made it work. I really liked this.

I cried. I can honestly say I cried after I read this. It was only a couple of tears but that's a big thing for me. Congratulations on writing such a touching story.

you are a very twisted person... Want to be friends:) lol yeah I liked this one a lot it's twisted and messed the fuck up but good. but do me a favor and stop torturing Mello and Matt.