I thought the top part actually Happened then I kept on reading and so relived :)

I'm not the gonna lie the dream sequence felt like a copout. Sure if would have been a tragic story, but it would have been authentic to those who've passed from an aggressive cancer. Anyways aside from this one section I really enjoyed the whole story.

That scared me!But all in all good story.

So sad!

Oh my god![[[

What! I have just barely read the first chapter and I'm already sobbing my heart out!

I'm gonna cry!

Fue hermoso, Leo siempre luchará por ellos

You got me at the grave i stared to cry at it because Leo is my favorite one this is a good story. And a lot of people never finish this thing so thakes for finishing it. You got me in there I am only 11 and I was so scared for him.

Bro you all most killed me in scared ness we you said Leo has cancer

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That was so good thank you for this great story. I'm legit crying!

But, Leo's the eldest brother. (2nd eldest if you count Karai)

YAY! He's not deaded! Now I won't have to use this Katana I conveniently bought.

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If Leo dies, I will scream! And I'm a 16 year old boy!

I doubt that alot. My Irish nerves are kicking in right now along with the Judo side of my Mixed Martial Arts training.