You should continue

This was rec'd today on FB and I popped over to read it. I am very glad that I did, as it was very good. Great writing. I love that they were together by the end, but not right when he got there.

Good story - leaves me with a lot of conflicting thoughts. I do want them to be happy, for her to move on, but I also wonder if it's with the right person. But how could Jasper NOT want his fiance to be happy, and who better to trust her with than his best friend? I think it's the 8 months - if it were over a year, it might be easier for me to accept it for what it is - a different love for a different person.
Thanx for sharing!

beautiful wish it was longer

This was heartbreakingly sweet!
Loved it.

x

Beautiful OS, thank you for sharing.

No offense but as long as they live in a house jasper and bella shared, wear his clothes... Bella being constantly reminded in some form of him. She can't be 'his', if anything she's the rich widow accepting the pool boys advances. Sounds bittersweet? Yes it feels that why to me, i don't like "sloppy seconds" so to speak.

Tho i have the STRONG feeling this bella and edward would have shaken it up anyway if jasper didn't die once they met of course.

That was always the sweetest reminder of being together was to lay my head on my husband heart and listen as it would slow down, even out and just be...
great writing!

AWW I wish you can continue this story! I really want to know if there relationship will continue once he comes back. Please continue and if you do continue please update very soon please! D

Very touching. I could feel the connection and shared grief between the two. Thank you for sharing.

Ahh..

this is was good, sad but good!

Bittersweet.

Sweet.

That was beautiful!

Ohhh such a tender story! Thank you.