wowzas! that was so hot and i loved the romantic ending. your attention to detail is awesome. great job!

Wonderful story! Very well written. Thanks for sharing!

I liked this story. I thought you did a great job. Only a couple of grammar issues. You may want to have someone carefully read over it and help you find the 2-3 typos.

Cosmyk

you outdid yourself in this chapter. It was even better than the last one and that is saying something. It really was erotic.

nice. it was really good.

Wow! I'm giving you loads of praise! That story was great! Keep it up!

Wow, I applaud you. I would never have guessed this was your first, if you hadn't mentioned it, so kudos to you. My only compliant is...Ron? Why couldn't you have picked Draco or somebody else? *winks and blows a razzie* Well, live and learn! Great writing.

i liked it!

if u left it after the 1st chapter, it would have felt incomplete, somehow, u no?

That was a lot of fun.!

k

well done

Fuck, I need a shag! XD

Congrats, well done.

You think you're done...but then your reviewers beg for more.

I love this story! You're a really good writer-awesome descriptions!

I continue the chant of "more" but understand if it's strictly a two-shot :)

But please continue writing! I love Ron and Hermoine, and yours was excellent!

sure read like erotica to a good writer and i hope you have other stuff on here besides lemon stories

Very nicely done ] I don't usually read this pairing, but it was very interesting.